Comments | maeby_surely: LOST HoHoHo fic for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/haldoor">haldoor</a></strong> (Sawyer/Sayid, NC-17)

maeby_surely

LOST HoHoHo fic for haldoor (Sawyer/Sayid, NC-17)

Jan 01, 2009 23:18

Title: seas between us broad have roared
For: haldoorPairing/Characters: Sawyer/Sayid ( Read more... )

slash, fic exchange, prompts, lost, m/m, fic, sawyer/sayid, lost_squee

Comments 7

haldoor January 2 2009, 08:29:13 UTC

OMG! Talk about HOTHOTHOT. Awesome; absolutely awesome! I really couldn't have asked for a better gift! It might have been a while since you wrote anything, but this... wow... just wow! Thank you so much - it's wonderful! *throws confetti and gives you millions of points for wondrousness* ;-) I really can't even think to say what bits I liked best, it was all great!

maeby_surely January 3 2009, 02:37:14 UTC

YAY I am so glad you liked it!!! After I read your awesome fic I was a little worried because there were some similarities. But hey, great minds, right? ;D

haldoor January 3 2009, 09:45:54 UTC

Oh, great minds indeed! But similarities aside, I think they're certainly different enough! Thanks again, I loved it! ;-)

zelda_zee January 2 2009, 08:40:39 UTC

Ooh, hot! GUH! Very well done, and it certainly isn't evident that you haven't written in a while. And wow, first time writing slash? One would never know it!

S/Sd established relationship porn is one of my favorite things, so I rejoiced to see this, and you did such a wonderful job with it!

My favorite part:

Sawyer strokes himself urgently, pausing only to reach down and pull Sayid's hair back from his face. "Want you to see how you look to me. How fucking hot you are, how...ah...how fucking gorgeous every inch of you is...fuck!"

I could feel my temperature rise as I read that. Love it!

maeby_surely January 3 2009, 03:19:38 UTC

Wow thanks so much! If reading slash is any kind of qualification...plus the prompt was so great, I mean, what IS better than S/Sd relationship porn???

The total lack of practice showed up in that I was partway in and was like, "Why am I writing in this tense? How am I gonna keep this up?" But I couldn't figure out how to go back and change it :P

siluria January 2 2009, 17:44:54 UTC

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, well I'm happy, and I think that's a perfect way to spend New Year! ;)

jaydblu January 2 2009, 18:17:20 UTC

Oh, very hot! I love the concept of them being able to watch themselves onscreen while they're having sex. Nice...