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mae_o_nays

Pleasant Tales from Pleasantview 3

Aug 14, 2010 13:31

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nepheris August 14 2010, 13:13:18 UTC

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Awww, Dirk being all concerned and cute with Lillith! Lillith seems so fragile, I hope she's not getting herself into any more trouble. I wonder who she's staying with, though?

I really like the little touches you put in the pictures - everyone's expressions are spot on, and I love the family picture in Dirk's room :)

I guess Darren's all depressed over Cassandra's wedding :(

I love your Dustin, he's very 'difficult' but without coming over as angsty or overdoing it.

Good stuff! I'm really looking forward to the next update :)

mae_o_nays August 15 2010, 09:18:56 UTC

Thank you! Dirk and Lilith are ridiculously cute together. I have pictures to prove it. The next chapter will be a continuation of this one (I had too much stuff I wanted to squash into this one!), so we'll see where Lilith's heading.

The expressions are all luck, but they definitely influence the way I write the characters. Dirk's worried face in front of the TV was one of the first photos I took for this chapter, and it completely shaped his character. The family picture is by showercapfrog, so I can't take any credit for it :)

I'm glad Dustin 'works'. His poor mother...

mzyra August 14 2010, 15:40:03 UTC

Wow, this is great - definitely looking forward to seeing more of this :)

mae_o_nays August 15 2010, 09:19:10 UTC

Thank you :)

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mae_o_nays August 15 2010, 09:26:26 UTC

I've always got that vibe from Lilith - a bit nervous, a bit bird-like. Who wouldn't be fragile with that family?

selenaq13 August 14 2010, 17:06:11 UTC

You make them sims one can care about, Dirk is so sweet with Lilith <3

mae_o_nays August 15 2010, 09:28:17 UTC

Oh, thank you :) Like I said up there ^^, I've got some outtakes of Lilith and Dirk that'll make your teeth rot with sweetness!

cloudygray August 14 2010, 17:33:15 UTC

This is great! I really like all your characters. Especially Lilith. Poor girl needs a hug. :(

*goes to find the first two chapters*

mae_o_nays August 15 2010, 09:43:43 UTC

Thank you :) I feel bad for Lilith, she starts out with the worst possible story. We're practically encouraged to make her run away. She's probably got the worst deal of all the Pleasantview characters.