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madwomanpoems

Fic - Jack Writing Exercise

Jan 11, 2011 17:59

These is nothing more than a little Jack Kelly writing exercise. I do these now and then to practice writing certain characters. But this has a lot of meta in it, so I thought I'd post it, even though the writing style is definitely sub-par ( Read more... )

jack kelly: cowboy and white knight, fanfiction, newsies: slash and general badassery, spot: likes marbles and world domination, david jacobs: a walkin' mouth

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cymbalism219 January 17 2011, 18:53:31 UTC

These are all impressive. Focusing on just one character with this meme is a clever idea -- maybe I'll have to try it that way sometime. Particular things I liked: I love the image of Jack warming his fingers over the soup pot -- so perfect! Jack working at the docks in number 3 is an intriguing idea. Jack and David not keeping in contact post strike (w/o hard feelings or anyone taking off to Santa Fe) is a really, really intriguing idea. Number 6 is intense, and you nailed number 8 with that last line.

Sorry it took me like a week to get around to commenting. I've seriously had this tab open since you posted!

madwomanpoems January 17 2011, 19:20:03 UTC

Oh don't even worry about the time!

Thank you ever so much. I'm incredibly flattered. <3