Fic - When It Rains

[madwomanpoems]

Title: When It Rains
Fandom: Newsies
Pairing: Jack/David
Rating: PG... more or less?
Word Count: ~3000
Warnings: boy/boy kissing (possibly more implied), a very shirtless Jack Kelly (which is not so much a warning as a flaunting.
Disclaimer: notminenotminenotminenotmine.
A/N: This was written for mosephy over at The Refuge for Summer Secret Slash. The

Comments

[anonymous]

...

I approve of this. I approve of this very much.

Let me attempt to be coherent.

1. You don't know how happy it makes me that you still write Newsies fic. I didn't know if you had stopped, but it makes me terribly, terribly happy that you haven't.

2. YOU WRITE SO WELL. All your writing just kinda gets in your face and is like, "YOUR EMOTIONS. LET ME EVOKE THEM."

3. GUH. That's all, really.

4. Now I'm picturing Christian Bale without a shirt. Thanks for that.

5. I really just want to run up to some random person now when it starts to rain and yell, "Did you just spit on me?" because how awesome would that be? Or maybe I'm a bizarre person. Hm.

6. David Jacobs has never been casual, nor has he ever not sounded like a mother in his life. Why does he even try? XD

7. YOU ARE AMAZING. I feel the need to reiterate this every time I talk to you because of how true it is. Need proof? Look no further than this fic. Seriously.

Love! ♥ ♥

Ellie

[madwomanpoems]

1) Of course I still write Newsies fic! It's still my favorite fic. Because Javid is still my OTP forever. <3

2) This? This lady? This made me cry. I am so freaking oversensitive about what I write and something that-- God, how are you so perfect... It made me cry.

3) *still crying*

4) MY PLEASURE. MMMMM.

5) DOOO IT AND CHRONICLE YOUR TALES HERE, MY FRIEND.

6) I love David. So much. He is my baby. (Or, you know, the male-me...)

7) *more crying. really*

[anonymous]

1. Awesome! *celebration dance*

2. *huuuuuugggggsssss*

3. *stilllllll hugging*

4. MINE AS WELL. MMMM, INDEED.

5. I MAY. I MAY BE IRRESISTABLE TO THIS PLAN'S CHARMS OF HILARITY.

6. Ahhahaha, there is so much me in that sentence you don't even wanna know.

7. *still hugging. Really.*

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Ellie

[cymbalism219]

There are so many lines in this that I wanted to quote when I typed up my little mini review at the Refuge because they were interesting, insightful little descriptions. (One I hadn't seen before: Jack just stared at David like he had a fish swimming out of his mouth. Ha!) Sweet little fic!

Also, mosephy does have an LJ! She's a hoot.

[madwomanpoems]

This... this is such an awesome, awesome compliment. I can't even describe how good it made me feel. Thank you so much.

Also, thanks! I'll fix that!

[sleighttrick]

I haven't read any Newsies fanfiction in AGES.
And this was too great for words.

[madwomanpoems]

Oh my goodness, thank you.