Still He Waits

Apr 02, 2006 18:35

Ok guys...I have another MerDer fanfic. I know I haven't updated She Doesn't Even Know with the second chapter yet..I kind of had a writer's block..but I am almost done with it with the second chapter. So while y'all were patiently waiting I had this other idea that came to me and I decided to write it. It's not my best because I kind of did it in ( Read more... )

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sillyg April 3 2006, 00:04:18 UTC
It's not bad but it is short! You could give some more detail on the "family" reaction...you could give some Addison interaction when he's falling apart. And you could give us another chapter.

(I never know if people want real feedback or just "more more!" so if you just want more more then you can ignore the first part of this comment.)

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thekillerinme April 3 2006, 00:30:18 UTC
I really like your writing style...there's something unique about it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Great job :)

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hockeysaurus April 3 2006, 05:47:10 UTC
As a Bostonian, I wonder where in Boston she's going.

(most likely it would be Brigham & Womens' or MGH.) =)

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its your favorite reviewer... duck_babe2010 April 7 2006, 01:30:15 UTC
Yup. So. I loved it Mads. You're an awesome wirter woman.
Can't wait to read the second chap. of "She doesn't even know" !!
I'm sure it'll be fantastic.
[IFREAKINGLOVEYOU]♥

-Lexi

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jy286 April 10 2006, 11:15:05 UTC
Ooo, I didn't see this one before. Anyway, as short as it was, it was sweet. I liked it. A lot. =) And I simply adore your writing style. It is awesome. Looking forward to the next chap (if you intend to write one). =) Keep it up girl! Love you heaps! =D

Jen
xoxo

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