Fic - The Awakening (J2)

[madebyme_x]

Title - The Awakening
Summary - Jared is a recruiter from The Agency. Jensen is his mark. When they meet, it's going to change the world.
Rating - PG13
Genre /Spoilers - J2. None.
Warnings - Language (nothing explicit).
Word Count - 1500
Disclaimer - I'm not making a profit, this is just for fun and all the standard disclaimers apply.
A/N - A

Comments

[zara_zee]

Wow. I can't believe how short this is. I mean, for such a short fic it really packs one heck of a punch; you managed to work in so much detail that it felt like it was a much longer story. Reminiscent of Heroes, this really had me spellbound from start to finish. Fabulous fill. :)

[madebyme_x]

Gosh, thank you so much what a super sweet comment!

I was worried about the word count when I took part in this challenge (2500 words max) and I tried hard to cram as much as I could into the fic and it still ended up being short. But I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed it.

Thank you again for your kind words. :)

[gypsy_atavari]

This is amazing! I loved how much world building you managed. Makes me want more. :-)

[madebyme_x]

Thank you for stopping by and for taking the time to comment. I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed the fic and world building.

Thanks again. :)

[trishabooms]

Really good! Such an awful lot is said in surprisingly few words.

[madebyme_x]

Thank you! That's the great thing about this challenge, it makes you narrow your focus because of word limit.

Thanks again for stopping by and for your kind words. :)

[becc_j]

Just reread and still love this. Also noticed a line near the beginning ' The mark has been vetted and he's clean. It's nothing like what happened in the alley six months ago.' lines like this are just wonderful, so much story and I really don't know how you came up with all the details throughout.

[madebyme_x]

Thank you for stopping by, I'm so happy that you enjoyed it, especially as this is a re-read!

I think I just lucked out, something in your prompt called to me and while I'm usually a slow writer, the fic just kind of wrote itself (I wish it was that easy all the time, I'm desperate for inspiration right now!) For me, it was a very visual fic, and I just wrote what I saw.

Thanks again for reading this a second time. I really am thrilled that you enjoyed it. Take care, :)

[scullspeare]

Such an intriguing fic! You've given us one layer that allows glimpses of so many more in this fascinating world you've created. Awesome job. What's that saying: always leave them wanting more? Mission accomplished! :-)

[madebyme_x]

Thank you so much for stopping by, it's always great to hear from you.

The difficult and challenging thing about this exchange was the limited world count and I wanted the fic to feel somewhat complete but also slightly opened ended. I'm really happy to hear that you left wanting more.

Thanks again for reading and for taking the time to comment, I really appreciate your support. Take care, :)