Of your little runaway and Our first vanilla sex

[made_chan]

Titre : Of your little runaway and Our first vanilla sex
Author : Made_chan / Madespace
Type : One shot
Genre : Drama - Romance
Pairing : KyuMin
Rating : NC-17
Words : 1779
Summary : Sungmin feared Kyuhyun's love and tried to escape.

Comment : English isn't my first language, and it's my first time writing in english, so if you have some advise or anything

Comments

[katii_yeom]

i really liked it :)

and i think your English is really good... i wish i could write like this :D i mean English isn´t my first laguage too, and i also write fics ... but i´m afraid to translate them because of my fail grammar xD

[made_chan]

Thank you for commenting ♥

Well I wouldn't have published without my beta x') My grammar is too bad ^^"

And before my beta, I made so big non sense xD

Maybe you could write in english with some help ^^

Thank you again for commenting ♥

[shichi04]

This is good. It's so sweet :DD

I haven't read the 50 shades trilogy yet (I'm scared of what my mom might think of me if she saw me reading that LOL)
Is the story really good?? I'm really curious >__<

And your english is good. There is nothing to worry about :DD

[made_chan]

Thank you for reading & commenting ~

And well 50 shades trilogy isn't the best story I read, BUT Christian Grey is addicting I read it more for him now than the story itself xD And well since my parents are french they didn't have any idea what I was reading since I buy english edition of the book xD Since I'm 21, they don't have a say in my reading anyway xD Oh and ... I'm not sure, but I think you can find the first book online on pdf ^^

And my english is all thanks to my beta who proofread it ^^

[made_chan]

Thank you for reading and commenting ~

And I'll try ^^ but I already write a lot in French and I'll be back to school in a few week, but let's see maybe I'll manage to write something else ^^

I hope so ^^

And yeah, vanilla sex is "cute" ~ but only compared to BDSM sex x')

[made_chan]

Thank you for reading and commenting ♥

Yeah the girl is quite easy on giving the key the way I write it xD (In my head there was more details but I didn't know how to put them in the story without it sounding useless and in the end she gives it away easily xD)

I'm happy you liked it and my english look good thanks to my beta ^^

[made_chan]

Thank you for reading and commenting ♥

I'm glad you liked it :)

Thank you !