FIC: "Chutes And Ladders" 1 / 1

Apr 11, 2007 00:50

Mouths. Soft, warm, pink and acerbically bitter from beer.  Underage drinking at its finest.  Two good friends share a drunken kiss in the shadows sitting on a picnic bench.  It startles the younger one even though he is the one who has initiated this meeting of the mouths by leaning in, his tongue rough, wet, sloppy and darting.  He’s just shy of ( Read more... )

bam & ryan

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trollsttroll April 24 2007, 05:40:55 UTC
... what a lovely bed-time story...

*slinks off to bed with an evil glint in her eyes*

(seriously though, i loved this)

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maddys_slash April 29 2007, 20:01:01 UTC
LOL! Thanks for reading darling!! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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so_pseudogoth April 24 2007, 06:18:42 UTC
Mads, this is fuckin awesome. You literally appealed to all the senses. And the last one made me cry a little because... fuck, I miss laying chest-to-chest trying to breathe after sex. :(

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maddys_slash April 29 2007, 20:01:39 UTC
Aw darling, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it -and [cuddles you]!

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la_bellavita April 24 2007, 07:22:20 UTC
aww maddy she'll love this. its really sweet. and hello teen Dugera

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maddys_slash April 29 2007, 20:01:58 UTC
I love that teen!Dugera lol!

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ash_neenan April 24 2007, 07:33:54 UTC
Loved it.

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maddys_slash April 29 2007, 20:02:08 UTC
Thank you.

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maddykerr April 24 2007, 10:25:00 UTC
Wow, you are amazine;y brillient! U loved the whole thing. So cute.... Thankyou so much. !!

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maddys_slash April 29 2007, 20:02:34 UTC
Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it :)

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