The Consort, Chapter 33

[maddycain]

Comments

[writtenvoice38]

Well done all around, it was perfect. And I'm glad you kept the italics in, now that I'm reading it again. Wonderful!

[transgenic_girl]

Now I'm horribly jealous of that wedding. That was fantastic. Very fitting for them.

I really do adore this story and how you write it.

And the images included at the end were definitely a nice touch.

[americanfairy]

*wipes tear*

That was so beautiful!! I love how is was so casual and laid back. And the vows that were going on inside DG and Cain's heads were just perfect.

I love how Danny couldn't light the fire and Az had to step in. Hilarious!!

That's so cool that you included pictures to some of your OCs. Thanks!

And now to the Honeymoon!! Yay!

[jessickuh]

The vows made me bawl like...like...a four-year-old...with separation anxiety...on her first day of school.

And he is so a stud.

Is Cain wearing *the* pants at the wedding, or are they just another pair of tan pants? Or are *all* his tan pants just that tight?

Go Az!

[elliejgirl]

Awwww... that was such a great 'them' wedding.

And I totally see Blythe Danner as Thelma.