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Born This Way - Chapter 6

Jul 14, 2012 20:20

Title: Born This Way 6

Characters/Pairings: Jack/Ianto, John, Gray, Owen, Toshiko/Tommy, Suzie, OCs

Rating: NC-17

Warnings/Contains: Supernatural themes, character death, drug references, dub-con.

Summary: Sequel to Choices - Ianto Jones was born and raised in Hell, but he isn’t feeling as demonic as usual lately-thanks to Jack Harkness. But you can’t ( Read more... )

jack/ianto, torchwood fic, au, born this way

Comments 14

sandysan2013 July 14 2012, 11:34:21 UTC

Oh, Gray. This is going to end badly if you interfere. Please leave it alone! You're supposed to watch, not interfere!

madbottoms July 15 2012, 00:13:22 UTC

He's never been good at just watching, even as a kid. And now as an angel he can get into a lot more trouble .

diggybear July 14 2012, 12:59:02 UTC

Oh Gray what are you going to? :(

madbottoms July 15 2012, 00:13:50 UTC

Me thinks he might be straying off the path a little.....

spud1963 July 14 2012, 15:59:32 UTC

Gray seriously, you are going to lose Jack if you keep doing what you are doing. If you love your brother you will accept he loves Ianto and Ianto loves him. Those demons are scary

madbottoms July 15 2012, 00:15:03 UTC

Yeah they are pretty scary and Gray isn't really doing his job properly. I think temptation may be a bit of an obstacle for him in the next few chapters.

lilferret July 14 2012, 16:39:12 UTC

Dammit, Gray! That girl was hitting on Ianto. Not the other way around. You're gonna lose your damned wings!

madbottoms July 15 2012, 00:16:30 UTC

Yeah, he's pretty clueless for all the power he now holds. But then he is really still a boy and now he has all these emotions to work through as well. His wings may just be at risk. We'll find out very soon how that works out.

hatorl July 15 2012, 15:38:28 UTC

Hi! I'm new.
I have been reading your work, you're magnificent!
I'm so attached to this story, the first part was so intense. I never know what will happen in the next chapter.
I will start to comment for now on, if that's ok. Warning: me english is not perfect, but I will do my best to express how much I like your work.

About the chapter: Gray is no focussed, he's not doing his job and now he wants to interfere in his relationship with Ianto! Troubles are coming! John will have to come back, maybe?

madbottoms July 15 2012, 21:16:02 UTC

That's great. It's always good to hear that. Hope you continue to enjoy it as it unfolds.

Cheers