[One Shot] Perception

Aug 07, 2013 18:08


Title: Perception
Author: MadameAesthetic
Pairing: Leo/N
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Death
Summary: The way one sees something is different than one would expect.

Author's Note: Random Twitter thoughts of VIXX and motorbikes turned into 2 AM quick writings. First time ever writing/finishing something VIXX related and haven't written anything fic-like in a long time. ( Read more... )

media: my one shot, pairing: leo/n, fandom: vixx

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hongbins August 8 2013, 03:39:25 UTC
breathes heavily
i have no coherent thought rn
but this is BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
here have my tears goodbye

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madameaesthetic August 8 2013, 04:18:49 UTC
Thank you~ ;m; -hands you a tissue in return for your tears-

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daylighreverie August 8 2013, 03:48:41 UTC
I supposed to read the warning first I know I regret it now. But despite the death of Taekwoon it's beautifully written. I'm your fan. Kbye.

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madameaesthetic August 8 2013, 04:20:12 UTC
Buh yay <3 Thank you omg~

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krystal_32206 August 8 2013, 10:24:06 UTC
I should've read the warning..but as soon as I saw LeoN, I just plunged straight into the story..
But I don't regret reading this beautiful but sad story. TT_TT
Thanks for sharing!<3

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madameaesthetic August 8 2013, 14:42:43 UTC
Thank you for reading it! Glad you liked it omg~

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jamiexd August 8 2013, 19:22:39 UTC
This was beautifully written. I love the detail and how N's feeling/thoughts are put throughout. But I'm sorry but I can't ignore the blaring plot hole of how if the breaks were no longer working couldn't he have just stopped the engine or downshifting causing them to come to a gradual stop? Also motorbikes have two separate break systems and even in it's old age it would be highly unlikely that they both would go.
But even with that this is a lovely piece of writing which is full of emotion and brilliant timing. And you did say at the top that this was " 2 AM quick writings" so it's understandable that there is some things that aren't completely though. I hope you don't take this harshly. I do love the story it's just at the end this was all that I could time about instead of just enjoying it. Please don't be upset

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madameaesthetic August 8 2013, 20:09:36 UTC
Hah, I was wondering about the true mechanics tbh. Thank you for explaining that! The planning for this story was like very quick and just "throwing this thought out there" discussions on Twitter, so it was like "they're on a bike" "what happens next?" "boom, brakes goes out, boom, someone dies" kind of thing. I'm not that familiar with motorbike mechanics and such, so I'm really sorry that that factor had to ruin the experience of reading the story for you. >.< I'll work harder~

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doctor_ravi August 17 2013, 03:14:37 UTC
The last line did it for me. My feels just exploded and tears... oh, tears ;; This is so beautiful!

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madameaesthetic August 18 2013, 04:47:04 UTC
Glad you liked it. Thank you~

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