[Fic] Mr. Fish - 5/5

[madameaesthetic]

Title: Mr. Fish
Author: MadameAesthetic
Rating: PG-13 [Warning: Crude language, violence]
Pairing: Slight P.O/Taeil and Zico/Kyung
Genre: AU, Drama, Something
Summary: People think Taeil’s fish keeping hobby is just a normal hobby. It’s not.

Author's Note: This is my first fanfiction, so please be kind. ^^; I really wanted to write a story about Taeil's

Comments

[ladyasriel]

I... have no words ;~; you say you're still working on improving... I imagine what would it be like when you achieve it, because seriously...
you made not only a plot; you also gave a meaning, used the claustrophobia topic very well (I think, since I don't know much about it), and the way you ended it was just glorious.
the scene where Jihoon saved Taeil, I was almost squealing (and it's 2am here, look what you've done lol).

I can just say you killed me here:
"'Unlike you,' Jihoon continued. 'I have someone that I can care about and be a part of their life.'" ;~;

and I'll sure look forward to your new stories!~ thanks for sharing this sweet thing.

[madameaesthetic]

Aww, thank you so much for all your comments, dear! I appreciate that you took interest in my story and from the sound of it, enjoyed reading it. ;m; Since this was my first fic, I say that I'm working on improving because I feel like I should seek to become better...but I'm happy to know that you took notice of my efforts and liked my work so far! Definitely look forward to my upcoming stories! ^^ I have another one currently in the making~

[engraved_16]

Ohh you completed it and released it all in one go ^-^
ahhh so glad they got together in the end, they sound so sweet and perfect
but man, that guy was absolutely crazy! all that, for taeil's sister D: he obviously has some problems of his own.

i reaally enjoyed this fic and of course, your brilliant writing :))
i hope to see some more of your future works!
♥♥♥

[madameaesthetic]

Ahah, yeah...what actually happened was that I wrote this part after part 2, because of sudden late night inspiration, and when it came time to fill in the other parts, I got sick with a cold and became busy and and....I just felt bad for not updating in a while, so as a treat, I made myself finish it and post it all for you guys to finally read. ^^; And yes, something is not right in that guy's mind...such a jerk for doing all that to Taeil. >.< But I'm happy to know that you read my story until the end and liked it! Thank you so much for that! ^^ New story coming soon~

[aoichanyume]

Wow. Just wow. I just read parts 1-5. This is just..srsly.. This leaves me jaw dropping, awe struck, amazed. Your characterization of Lee Taeil, who is one of my bias(its hard to have 1 bias in block b) and TaePyo, the most adorable pairing in Block B soo beautifully. I have nv read anything abt Taeil like this before. Ive found amazing Zikyung and U-Bomb authors alr...but you are my first amazing Taepyo author :) Please do keep writing abt Taeil. He's just so...perfect.

[madameaesthetic]

Omo, thank you for your comment! I feel so happy to hear that from someone who's Taeil biased. I have to say that I was also surprised at myself for choosing to write about TaePyo for my first fanfic, a relationship that's really delicate to write about, but I'm truly glad to hear that you liked it. ^^ I'll definitely do my best to write another TaePyo story in the future...I honestly think I kinda grew attached to them through this story. XD Although at the moment, a U-Bomb fic has been in the works and is slowly becoming finished, so please look forward to it~

[candiiez]

omg...the man is like...freaking crazy.
and I agree with everything Jihoo said to him about being an ' ignorant bastard' for doing this to Taeil.
Like, "the fuck, man ?" Lukcily, Hoonie has some common sense. becuz if I was was him, I'd kill right nao *_*

and the ending, omg thats so cute, they kissed ~♥
thanks for this story^^

[madameaesthetic]

Yeah...that man...I don't even want to call him a man because he's just not human. What he did isn't human. T_T But thanks to Jihoon, Taeil is fine now. ^^

I'm happy you liked the story although! Thank you so much for your interest~

[bahh1]

Thank you for this perfect story!

[madameaesthetic]

Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed~