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madame_ugly

Tecza (Round Robin) Legacy: Generation 3: Black

Sep 20, 2009 18:45

Bit o' background. The Tecza family is a combined Round Robin and Awesimsauce Legacy. So, each generation is handled by a different player who abides by the Awesimsauce rules.

Generation 3 of the Tecza family is lead by Obsidian Tecza (color scheme: black). He will usher in generation 4 (color scheme: orange). You have been warned (you may want ( Read more... )

round robin: tecza

Comments 12

iceraptoress September 21 2009, 08:36:59 UTC

Wow. This is really intense. Poor Obsidian is a mess!

I like the callbacks to his past early in the story, and how those things are affecting him, along with the depressions and unbalance and break-downs that come with being in the Black generation.

*moves onto the next part*

madame_ugly September 21 2009, 15:03:22 UTC

Poor guy WAS a mess. I'd hear crying and sigh, "where's Obsidian".

tiipiipii September 21 2009, 10:35:21 UTC

I have been waiting for this story and seeing it on the top of my f-list this morning really made my day!

This really is intense and fun with all the hints to actual game play only another simmer can get. You have incorporated them into a story nicely.

And Armando is wonderful. He makes the best faces. I especially love the pic of him getting into the coffin with a guilty look on his face.

madame_ugly September 21 2009, 15:05:32 UTC

Glad you liked it. The hints to actual game play were inspired by iceraptoress--she does that SO well in her stories.

I really love Bigfoot after this. I can't wait to get another one in Simsburgh, maybe to look after the Newson kids (or maybe I'll do a "Harry and the Hendersons" family).

laridian September 21 2009, 11:32:47 UTC

This is so cool. Great callbacks (as iceraptoress noted) and at first I wondered if things were going well for Obsidian... but of course they weren't and he's falling to pieces. And you got a Bigfoot to move in with the crazy man!

Tiffany is a very pretty townie, I'm looking forward to seeing how the kids turn out.

madame_ugly September 21 2009, 15:07:55 UTC

He was fine at first (well, except for almost dieing due to his vampirism--I had to get rid of that) but. . . yeah, he IS the black generation so.

I may have locked down a fear here and there, too, just to add to the drama.

anonymous September 21 2009, 22:20:51 UTC

Very nicely done. Like the dark depressive feel. Good writing.

On a lighter note - I was so amused that Tiffany's boobies seemed to have faces... like Tweedledum & Tweedledee in hats. I'm so easily amused.

It was this pic: http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/MadameUgly/Challenges/Challenges%20p2/43tiffanyproposes2.jpg

gheez September 21 2009, 22:22:59 UTC

Sorry, didn't mean to be anonymous. Not that you'd really know who I was anyway but I've been lurking for ages & have finally come out of my depressive state to be socialable because I enjoyed your story.... now I'm rabbiting away like a demented chimp, please ignore me. Oh gosh. Sorry.

madame_ugly September 22 2009, 11:34:57 UTC

I love when folks delurk (even if the comment is anon).

Go ahead and jabber all you want, I enjoy the attention.

madame_ugly September 22 2009, 11:33:38 UTC

Thanks.

Yeah, that shirt amused me a lot (and freaked me out).

laridian September 23 2009, 01:11:56 UTC

Okay, now I have more time & can leave a better comment! ^_^

I almost didn't recognize Obsidian! He looks very different in your game.

It was so touching that he helped take care of Ebony's future. Most legacies don't touch on the non-heirs. This was a really sweet thing, and a nice way to touch back to the previous generation.

Tiffany is a very attractive townie. That pic of them bathing/sponge bathing together, framed by the window - nice! Plus she seems like a pretty tough cookie. Obsidian isn't the easiest one to live with by a long shot, but Tiffany held up pretty well, all things considered.

Poor Obsidian, though, just falling apart so often.

The pic of Armando in the coffin is creepy! But I love how you describe his mannerisms. It really makes him seem "other".

madame_ugly September 23 2009, 11:32:26 UTC

Aw, thanks for coming back for another comment.

That's what's so fun about these round robins. Everyone has different cc and systems so faces change (yeah, Obsidian's more "ugly" in my game).

There's no way I could NOT point back to iceraptoress's story. Having the black generation made it easy too. Everyone knows that if you're messed up it's the fault of your parents/family, right?

This is the first time I've really played a Bigfoot. I really like them but they can be a bit dull (since their skills are all maxed). But they clean up when it comes to jobs (and are perfect for a BACC since they have all gold badges).