Peculiar: An Affair to Remember (part 3 of 3 section 2)

May 18, 2008 18:16


Aggie and Paul, their children fast asleep, returned to the first floor to finish tidying the house post-party.


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cindyanne1 May 19 2008, 21:11:38 UTC
Yikes! Hope Mother XYZ doesn't give that cowplant heartburn!

Oh but what a great descripion of poor Paul having to feed... her... to the plant. Just the right mix of disgust and determination. ((hugs Paul))

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madame_ugly May 19 2008, 22:15:48 UTC
As creepy as the cowplant is, I think XYZ will agree with it no problem.

Thanks. I was pretty pleased with the "Paul feed the cowplant" scene, too.

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amaryssobellus May 19 2008, 23:45:49 UTC
You sure make the cowplant way more sinister than it already is.

Gross. Even if I was a cowplant I don't know if I could eat Mother XYZ.

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madame_ugly May 20 2008, 11:25:49 UTC
I've always thought the cowplants were pretty damn cute.

Now?

Not so much.

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madame_ugly May 20 2008, 12:13:58 UTC
Can you tell I really love Aggie and Paul? I love when Paul lets his guard down and just enjoys Aggie's. . .Aggie-ness. Those moments make me so glad I didn't pair Paul off with Bottom ( ... )

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madame_ugly May 20 2008, 14:47:14 UTC
True, Lazlo's not really working the dating scene. He needs Marie bringing women to him!

Yeah, Klara and DJ are definitely attracted to two different aspects of our fair Lazlo. And for Lazlo's part, he's always been aware of when women are interested in him and able to interact with women (remember, he did have a relationship with Lakishmi) he just couldn't seal the deal. Not that Klara's helped him with that, there's nothing holding him back.

*snicker* Circe is a real ad-libber. She's in tune with her character!

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indigoleo May 20 2008, 05:21:03 UTC
"AGAMEMNON POLLINATOR!," Paul gasped, laughing. "Have you been sans underwear all evening?"
"What?. . .," Aggie snorted, "Paul, I was sitting with all the kids, I would have flashed them. . .what kind of father do you think I am. . ."

One like this...?
[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v707/indigoleo/Prosperity%20Challange/snapshot_f468b30c_74cc5751.jpg[/IMG]
I never thought about it too much, how they crouch when teaching a toddler to walk. Not until I caught this pic. No child should have to be subjected to that! LOL!

The whole scene with Paul feeding Mother's remains to the cow plant. Chilling. I don't know if I'll ever be able to look at that piece of meat the same way anymore.

Percy's face when he's sitting on the couch after seeing Abe and Al snuggled up together...it's perfect.

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That link isn't working....try this one. indigoleo May 20 2008, 05:23:02 UTC
Photobucket keeps being an ass.Or maybe I'm just using the wrong code.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v707/indigoleo/Prosperity%20Challange/snapshot_f468b30c_74cc5751.jpg

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madame_ugly May 20 2008, 11:45:59 UTC
I've thought a LOT about Aggie's choice of clothing. I know it sounds prudish, but he has two little girls. Should he be sitting cross legged in front of them, his kilt all open to the world? Also he's wandering about in his bitty little undies. It's kind of ok now, since the kids are too little to know the difference, but when they become children I might have to give Aggie some more modest underwear (maybe I'll show that in the story, that could be a hoot).

Yeah, that meat's a little grosser to me now, too (that close up pic where you can see the bone is kind of nasty).

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robbiex21 January 28 2009, 01:44:54 UTC
Kinda creepy... Mother XYZ's final resting place being in the digestive system of the cow plant. I have to say, I was surprised that you killed her off - surprised and amazed (that sounds kind of weird, I know).

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madame_ugly January 28 2009, 14:20:24 UTC
It was her time to go.

While it's easy to have a blatant evil character, it's more fun to delve into the little black spots inside otherwise good characters.

Or, to focus on the evil that is the government/military (I do love a conspiracy).

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