Comments | madame_ugly: Storytellers Challenge 005: Short story (Peculiar and Nocheat relevant)

madame_ugly

Storytellers Challenge 005: Short story (Peculiar and Nocheat relevant)

May 12, 2008 18:15

For Storytellers Chllenge 005: What do you think of (your) child/ren?

WC: not over 500, pic not over 5 (Peculiar and Nocheat relevant)

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madame_ugly May 13 2008, 16:50:17 UTC

It's already made the Peculiar scene, what with Julian seeing it featured on the "news".

It's also going to be fun to develop this. Until I did up this snippet, I hadn't really put much thought into it. Now I'm very interested in playing Nocheat some more and seeing what it gives me (Vicente randomly walked by Thetus's house, though I was planning to make them meet--I love when that happens).

simfulacts May 13 2008, 17:59:33 UTC

That was very touching! I really enjoyed it and I second the opinion that wishes it were longer.

madame_ugly May 13 2008, 21:56:14 UTC

Thanks.

I think this might grow into something larger and help me get back into Nocheat (I have a bit of pics just laying around waiting to be posted).

x_illegal_x May 13 2008, 19:10:36 UTC

I liked the first person point of view. There was a lot of depth in the entry...I like how Thetus is so conflicted over his child and how other people embrace them. Good job.

I also can't wait to see Nocheat again!

madame_ugly May 13 2008, 21:57:45 UTC

Thank you. I don't do first person in Nocheat very often (or in general) but for short things it's sometimes easier.

I can't wait to get back to Nocheat. I just have to wrap up part 3 of "An Affair to Remember" and we'll get some Nocheat right after that (while I set up Top Model)