Storytellers Challenge 002: Drabble+: Death

[madame_ugly]

Storyteller Challenge 002:  Drabble+:  Death

(note: tiny bit spoilerish for my story Peculiar, but not really)

Comments

[mjo5oh]

great! your writings are always so realistic.

"Check it out," he held his arms out and presented himself as if for inspection, "I'm a teen."

that's exactly something a real kid would say.

[madame_ugly]

Thanks.

Tommy Ottomas is really growing on me, so he's easy to write.

(I'm very tempted to do an Ottomas legacy!)

[strange_tomato]

Very sweet. I'm really liking Tommy. He seems so grounded and calm.

Those photos are really great. They're just really nice compositions, and they show just the right amount of information for the writing.

I'd love to see you do an Ottomas legacy. You should go for it.

[madame_ugly]

Tommy is very calm, but very sensitive. He's really the middle child of the Ottomas clan. David and Sharla were paired off early, the twins (Mark and Michael) have a natural pairing, leaving Tommy the odd man out. He latched onto Granny. With her dead, he's drifting toward his baby sister (who's also his granny's namesake) and family cat, Sissy.

Thanks. I hid a light pole in a tree to get the light for the night pic! I'm going to remember that trick, it worked GREAT.

I'm really thinking about it (and Ottomas legacy). I think I have a few hoods where they haven't been used (or used much). But that's just another distraction from my established stuff. . .

[silentsteel]

Wonderfully sweet, and still a little sad. Tommy's a nice boy, I already like him very much.

Excellent nighttime shot - that light pole in a tree trick really worked!

[madame_ugly]

Thanks.

I can't believe I never thought about hiding a light pole before. I'm so dense.

[realandgritty]

Thats so sweet!

[madame_ugly]

Thanks.

I have a major soft spot for the Ottomas clan. Sharla and Tommy in particular.