Eighth Post

[demishock]

Long time no see! I hope that the release of FF9 on the PlayStation Network will spur some more activity in this fandom... *crosses fingers*

Anyway, I've had this one sitting around for a while, but I wasn't wholly satisfied with it. I'm still not entirely sure I nailed the characterization, so any input on that would be greatly appreciated!

Comments

[minionofspot]

Oh my gosh, this is so cute. It sounds like it could be a scene straight out of the game! I love how you worked everyone into the conversation.

[demishock]

Thank you! Hearing that it could be a scene out of the game itself is one of the best compliments, so that just makes my evening~♥ And I'm glad you liked everyone's bit of input; I'm never quite sure if I'm making it sound like a convincing conversation or if it sounds like I'm just giving everyone a line for the sake of representation. orz Happy to hear I seem to have gotten it right!

[makaioh]

So cute :D
Eiko's a great catalyst for everything.

[demishock]

/late reply is late. /o\

Thank you! And she really is. :)

Love your icon! ♥ Steiner's another FF9 char that needs more love.

[dawnrune]

This was really great. I liked Eiko and Vivi trying to "console" Amarant. That was very amusing. Also, I liked the input of the other characters eventually, particularly Freya, then Quina at the end. XD

[demishock]

I'm so happy you liked it! ♥ I'm glad the character input didn't seem too contrived. I was having a lot of trouble trying to make it sound natural and not like I was just cramming them in to prove they were all there, so that's really nice to hear. ^^;