Fic: Our Hearts Are Wrong Part II (Sherlock/Irene, Sherlock [BBC])

Jun 09, 2011 03:18

Title: Our Hearts Are Wrong Part II : I've Been Dragging Around From The End Of Your Coat For Two Weeks
Author: mad_teagirl
Fandom: Sherlock (BBC)
Character/Pairing: Sherlock/Irene
Rating: PG-13
Summary:This is set roughly four years before the start of the series. I had been writing a Sherlock/Irene that took place during the current series time-line, but ( Read more... )

fic, sherlock, sherine, sherlock/irene, irene adler, sherlock holmes, our hearts are wrong

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Choices, choices... sabrinaphynn June 9 2011, 10:42:41 UTC
If you insist on offering up internal organs, i choose the spleen. Tee hee ! You know how I feel about this loveliness.
Darling girl, you make being your skull a pleasure and a joy. Going to go wrap up in my shock blanket of joy now :)

"It's all been Done" by the Bare Naked Ladies is playing on my radio, and gosh does that not make me think of some sort of fan video with a blend of
Grenada verse and Sherlock. With flouncing and couch-jumping. Silly, one track brain. You know what?! Pay no attention to me. Look, I have a blanket...
Jenn who is babbling again.

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Re: Choices, choices... mad_teagirl June 9 2011, 10:50:21 UTC
My dear, the spleen is yours and no one else's. If I could somehow mark it with sharpee I would ^.~

You say the sweetest things ♥ I am still overwhelmed by the shock blanket comment. It makes me unbelievably happy having you beta/skull for me, you don't even know.

Oh goodness, I love that song. And I love the idea of watching Ben and Jeremy flounce and couch jump while listening to it. Curse my inability to video edit! I will inevitably think of this every time I hear this song now, and that is something I am totally okay with.

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Re: Choices, choices... sabrinaphynn June 9 2011, 12:43:55 UTC
Yea! Spleen!
Sad thing is EVERY song I hear somehow gets connected in my head to this fandom somehow... Or almost every one. Pop songs tend to bring up J/S slashy images in my head, classical stuff brings up Irene, etc...
Nothing like obsession, eh?
Got to go... Train to center city will just not wait for me, and alas I think that Mycroft's limo won't just pull up to my curb, either.
Old 97's playing now- dance with me- geesh, your pair are now doing an impromteau tango only head and they are making John giggle.
Bye!

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Re: Choices, choices... mad_teagirl June 10 2011, 10:55:28 UTC
Hahahahaha oh man, I can't even tell you how I relate to that sentiment. EVERYTHING reminds me of SOMETHING Sherlock Holmes related. At least we are on the same page obsession wise.

Is it weird that I'm a little jealous that you are catching a train? Why do I stupidly love trains so much?

I love this image of Irene and Sherlock tangoing and John giggling. It is WAY too cute! I love it, and I love you

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tinmiss1939 June 9 2011, 19:43:19 UTC
Sherlock is so strangely sweet in this Those brief moments of uncertainty in all the MASSIVE EGO are very endearing. It should seem OOC, the almost-hug and the almost-hopeful voice, but it works.

I like your Adler and her backstory. She's great with SH and Lestrade.

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mad_teagirl June 10 2011, 10:57:14 UTC
awww!!! Thank you so much!!! Sherlock is a bit difficult to write for so I'm really happy that he isn't massively OOC. And I'm so happy you like Irene, I feel like it's taken me forever to get her voice right.

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suchaprince June 10 2011, 08:59:16 UTC
Hooray new chapter! I was not expecting this to see the light of day so soon!

And the case! I really liked Irene figuring it out but not telling Sherlock because she wanted it to be her that solved case. That was so perfect!

And I love the slightly parental relationship you've created with Lestrade and Irene. It might be my favorite part of this verse of yours! (Although we all know I'm patiently waiting for the storyline-that-shall-not-be-mentioned-because-I-know-secret-upcoming-plot-points-that-would-spoil-things-for-others-and-I-wouldn't-want-to-do-it-so-I-won't, but still, so excited for what's to come in the far off future. And the mix to go with it!)

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GRANADA ICONS UNITE! ... also your icon looks like it just got laid mad_teagirl June 10 2011, 11:00:52 UTC
I know right? But remember that day when you came home and I was like "ALL DAY I HAVE BEEN WRITING" .... it was totally this. I'm kind of stoke that you liked it. But you know how nervous about this pairing I am around you.

I won't lie, I love making up cases for them to solve. So many killers so little time.

I love writing Lestrade... but then again, I love Lestrade. Poor Lestrade just wants to look out for her.

The next chapter begins with Irene and Sally, I thought that would make you happy.

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Dude, he totally just got laid. suchaprince June 11 2011, 10:01:58 UTC
Yay I'm so excited for upcoming Irene and Sally friendship!

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well... him and Watson ARE rather dashing mad_teagirl June 11 2011, 10:06:56 UTC
Good!

Although, much like Cas and Ruby's pop tarts, I worry that I am over selling this.

p.s. your subject with that icon made me die

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claro3 June 10 2011, 22:03:42 UTC
I just devoured this chapter. You are such a good writer, and this is such a good story! This is absolutely my favorite fic of the new Sherlock fandom. The first moment when Irene doesn't tell Sherlock what she's seen, when she lies to him because that knowledge belongs to her- Oh. My. God. I thought I couldn't love your Irene any more and then, boom, that happened.

I can't wait for chapter three!

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mad_teagirl June 10 2011, 22:52:17 UTC
Oh my goodness. I actually got a little emotional when I saw this in my inbox. I just, wow, thank you so much. This is the sweetest thing ever. Thank you ♥ ♥ ♥

And I'll try not to keep you waiting too long for the next installment

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claro3 June 11 2011, 23:52:30 UTC
Oh, gosh, please take your time! I'll happily wait for a repeat of this level of quality! :D

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mad_teagirl June 12 2011, 09:59:06 UTC
♥ ♥ oh thank you so much. You are too sweet

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mad_teagirl June 30 2011, 01:03:59 UTC
Oh my!! Thank you so much!!!!!
This was such a lovely comment to find on my little story, and I am so very glad that you are enjoying it! (you read it twice? really? twice? Oh my goodness that's sweet)

I'll try to have the next chapter out in the relatively near future. ^.~

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