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Sure Thing

Jun 16, 2009 02:13

Title: Sure Thing
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur, plus Gwen/Morgana and discussion of past Gwen/Merlin.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Adult having sex with a teenager. (For the record, said teenager is past the age of consent in the UK, where this is set.)
Length: ~9700 words.
Summary: Sequel to All In the Timing. In which Arthur's a teenager and Merlin's not, ( Read more... )

fic, merlin, timing verse

Comments 105

myrimidryad June 16 2009, 10:45:52 UTC

And I really, honestly thought this would be way creepy. BUT IT REALLY ISN'T!!! And it's adorable and fluffy and a little dash of angsty and lots of funny in all the right places and UTHER IN A CATSUIT! *dies laughing*

srin June 16 2009, 19:49:35 UTC

Yay! I'm glad it wasn't creepy. :D Mmm, catsuit!Uther... ahem. Thank you!

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srin June 16 2009, 19:49:56 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad it worked for you.

luisadeza June 16 2009, 11:24:39 UTC

I was honestly waiting for the big revelation with lots and lots of angst and pain, because sometimes I'm sick like that, but this is far too adorable and happy, I'm prefectly fine with it. XD
Much love for this AU! ♥

srin June 16 2009, 19:50:34 UTC

Angst and pain was definitely considered, but I just want them to be happy too damn much. ;) Thank you!

rodneyscat June 16 2009, 11:40:38 UTC

So completely delicious and satisfying; Arthur and Merlin having sex at every given opportunity, the memories returning, Gwen and Morgana together, the mutual appreciation between Morgana and Arthur, Gwen being her sweet self (I love the story of Merlin's first time!), Barbara (Merlin being thankful for Arthur's good youth in this incarnation; I can understand how he's careful not to disrupt the relationship between Arthur and his parents), Arthur so young and bubbly but also sincere and his desire to be honest. Arthur pinching Merlin's night-shirt, the ring, Merlin dipping Arthur into a kiss with Arthur laughing and protesting but loving it.

I had a wide, wide smile myself reading this fic :D

srin June 16 2009, 19:52:08 UTC

:D I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And eeeh, yay, I'm thrilled all those bits worked! Gah, I love Gwen, and Arthur's kind of a dork with the night shirts but I just couldn't resist. Whee, thank you!

archaeologist_d June 16 2009, 12:03:17 UTC

This was lovely. I thought Uther as a catburgler was really funny and so different from the king job description. :P

Loved how Arthur remembered and how they were so in love. Just wonderful.

srin June 16 2009, 19:53:18 UTC

Merlin was right about this incarnation being all cocked up. ;) Thank you, glad you enjoyed!