Passion Gap

Dec 20, 2007 08:20

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A/N: I’m taking some artistic license with the term “passion gap”. In the part of Africa where I grew up in, it is common for women to have their 4 upper front teeth removed (to give better blow jobs). This is commonly known as a "passion gap". Sometimes the same term is (erroneously) used for a ( Read more... )

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lizwontcry December 20 2007, 18:47:08 UTC
That was hot. :)

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mad_for_jorja December 20 2007, 19:33:21 UTC
Glad you liked it.

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mmm... sexy! anonymous December 20 2007, 23:19:31 UTC
I loved this and I would love to read your version of their first time since we all knew it was inevitable... I think that's why I like the way you wrote the observations, the details and the longing of Grissom and his imaginings.

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Re: mmm... sexy! mad_for_jorja December 20 2007, 23:58:13 UTC
Thanks for your comments. Currently I have an idea for companion piece (Sara's POV) for this fic. So if it seems that people are interested I will post that. About writing their first time; I'm not sure whether I'm brave enough to go there, but you are making me think about it.

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manateelotti December 21 2007, 07:07:08 UTC
wow. that was really really hot.

Love it!

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mad_for_jorja December 21 2007, 18:41:57 UTC
Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you liked it.

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zamboni12 December 22 2007, 11:00:29 UTC
Wow! Very hot! Very well done!

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wander52 December 29 2007, 16:07:25 UTC
I love it when we get to look inside Grissom's head...good job.

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