Re: Filled: Better Than Autodidacticism 3/3maypolesSeptember 16 2010, 22:33:51 UTC
“I want to know everything there is to know about you,” he says, unsure how else to explain himself. “More than the superficial knowledge I currently possess.”
Eeek, that is SO CASTIEL. I can actually imagine him saying that, uh, if he were in love with Dean, that is. (And who isn't?) But the point is, you really made this prompt work and you're kind of totally awesome! ;D
Re: Filled: Better Than Autodidacticism 3/3belle_favrielleSeptember 18 2010, 16:22:11 UTC
Okay, I re-read it, and it was still the most FANTASTIC thing ever. Just...pretty much everything that I love, mushed into one fic, and smothered in love. Faaavorite parts:
A distant, unfocussed look flits over his features, and Cas can see his chest move as his breath hitches, ever so slightly. He puts down the knife, sneezes wetly into his cupped hands. “HEHTZSHUH!” Deliciouuuus. I think I have a major thing for sneezes being described as 'wet'. *facepalm*
He finds himself oddly mesmerized by the sight of Dean sneezing, wondering exactly what it must feel like, to lose control in that brief and disconcerting way. You did a great job of working in why Cas is memorized by Dean's sneezyness, with passages like this.
“Whad?” he croaks, coughs into his sleeve. “You wadt to tagke a pigture? It'll last logger. Hhh-HASSZSHHZSHUH! Ugh, God,” he wipes his nose on the back of his wrist, leaving a shiny smear behind. “Gross,” he mutters, reaches for another tissue. meep! Oh Deeeean. <3
“Good,” Dean brushes their lips together again
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Re: Filled: Better Than Autodidacticism 3/327_jaredjensenSeptember 18 2010, 09:10:45 UTC
WHAT ARE YOU PEOPLE DOING TO ME?!?
Dude. I could ask the same question…first mad’s Dean/Cas, now this…oh LORD.
Gah. This is unbelievably hot. There are so many things I could say about this amazingly hot hotness, but I can’t even think of where to start…ummm….the hottest part was probably when Cas is asking Dean how it feels, and Dean is telling him while he needs to sneeze and DAMN. I could read this all night…
Re: Filled: Better Than Autodidacticism 3/3ayslinSeptember 23 2010, 18:55:19 UTC
Ghrmph.
Holy mother, that was spectacular. If this is what I've been missing not being on the Dean/Cas bandwagon, I won't be leaving my room for at least a month.
The stuffy talk was SPECTACULAR. And the fever and the SNEEZES. OMFG. Seriously. Better than chocolate. Friggin kicks chocolate's ass.
“Feels kide of dice, agtually..."
Hmmmrrmmmmmph. GUH.
In conclusion:
If that were any hotter, my ovaries would have spontaneously combusted.
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Thank you! :D
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Eeek, that is SO CASTIEL. I can actually imagine him saying that, uh, if he were in love with Dean, that is. (And who isn't?) But the point is, you really made this prompt work and you're kind of totally awesome! ;D
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Glad you liked it! :D
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Seriously. This. Seriously.
I have to go to work now (FML), but when I get back, I am reviewing THE SHIT out of this. Holy mother.
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A distant, unfocussed look flits over his features, and Cas can see his chest move as his breath hitches, ever so slightly. He puts down the knife, sneezes wetly into his cupped hands. “HEHTZSHUH!” Deliciouuuus. I think I have a major thing for sneezes being described as 'wet'. *facepalm*
He finds himself oddly mesmerized by the sight of Dean sneezing, wondering exactly what it must feel like, to lose control in that brief and disconcerting way. You did a great job of working in why Cas is memorized by Dean's sneezyness, with passages like this.
“Whad?” he croaks, coughs into his sleeve. “You wadt to tagke a pigture? It'll last logger. Hhh-HASSZSHHZSHUH! Ugh, God,” he wipes his nose on the back of his wrist, leaving a shiny smear behind. “Gross,” he mutters, reaches for another tissue. meep! Oh Deeeean. <3
“Good,” Dean brushes their lips together again ( ... )
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Are you kidding? You made my day! \o/
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Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it.
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Thank you!
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Dude. I could ask the same question…first mad’s Dean/Cas, now this…oh LORD.
Gah. This is unbelievably hot. There are so many things I could say about this amazingly hot hotness, but I can’t even think of where to start…ummm….the hottest part was probably when Cas is asking Dean how it feels, and Dean is telling him while he needs to sneeze and DAMN. I could read this all night…
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Thank you. :)
It's the best way to write fic: write all the stuff YOU want in a story, and sometimes people's kinks intersect.
Glad you liked it!
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Holy mother, that was spectacular. If this is what I've been missing not being on the Dean/Cas bandwagon, I won't be leaving my room for at least a month.
The stuffy talk was SPECTACULAR. And the fever and the SNEEZES. OMFG. Seriously. Better than chocolate. Friggin kicks chocolate's ass.
“Feels kide of dice, agtually..."
Hmmmrrmmmmmph. GUH.
In conclusion:
If that were any hotter, my ovaries would have spontaneously combusted.
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I'm so glad you liked it! The Dean/Cas bandwagon is a fun one, when you get the well-written fics.
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