i like it! it's mean; fast and sharp like a switchblade. no one believes me when i tell them my teeth were cut on theater of the cruel but its true and i prize no art higher than the stuff that puts the reader/viewer immediately on the defensive, the kind that makes enemies. Real poetry reminds the reader of how fragile the world surrounding him is and real poets accomplish this by destroying something beautiful.
I intend on finishing my current work in progress while im at work tomorrow, I'll try to post it later. We should find a place that will let us inflict our poetry on an audience.
Magnificent! I agree! And thank you for your praise and insight. Its true. Damn true. I look forward to seeing your completed piece as well.
You know what might be fun? Some kind of online poetry contest amongst people we know. one on facebook or some such! I'd only worry about it being a flop (knowing how good we all are with following through)
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I intend on finishing my current work in progress while im at work tomorrow, I'll try to post it later. We should find a place that will let us inflict our poetry on an audience.
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You know what might be fun? Some kind of online poetry contest amongst people we know. one on facebook or some such! I'd only worry about it being a flop (knowing how good we all are with following through)
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