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mackenziesmomma

Fic: Snapshots: Encounters of the Sandy Kind (1/4)

Nov 21, 2010 12:45

Title: Snapshots: Encounters of the Sandy Kind (1/4)
Fandom: Stargate
Rating: G
Genres: Fluffy, fluff, fluff (oh did I mention fluff?)
Summary: Sitting on a park bench Laura watched Nathan playing in the sandbox.
A/N: This is a response to clwilson2006 's "Kid fic- Single Parents meeting for the first time" AU prompt over at the major_explosion community. This is Lorne/Cadman ( Read more... )

au, fanfic, pre-ship, challenge entry, lorne/cadman

Comments 15

gelbes_gilatier November 21 2010, 21:28:17 UTC

Heh, it's a great start! (why yes, I do expect more than one story, seeing as it does have so much more potential :D)

Evan's so cute, being all gruff and a little embarrassed and everything :D And I like Laura who tries to appease him :D Go on writing *cracks whip

mackenziesmomma November 22 2010, 05:17:56 UTC

Thank you :)

Go on writing *cracks whip

*snaps off sharp salute* Ma'am yes ma'am.

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mackenziesmomma November 22 2010, 05:20:06 UTC

See the ever awesome gelbes_gilatier was all "Oh you could so write that story with your eyes closed." Well turns out that oh yeah I probably could. ;)

And you included Rodney! *lol*

Well then you ought to be happy about the other surprise guests who also appear in this story ;)

mercury973 November 22 2010, 02:13:56 UTC

LOL Of course Cadman is a tap dance teacher.
Great start and I can't wait to read more!

mackenziesmomma November 22 2010, 05:22:43 UTC

Thank you.

Of course Cadman is a tap dance teacher.

Had to work cannon bits in there somehow (and that is one of my FAVORITE Cadman bits of any of the tidbits we got about her)

somehowunbroken November 22 2010, 05:15:08 UTC

Oooh!

Tell me there's more coming. :D

mackenziesmomma November 22 2010, 05:23:49 UTC

Tell me there's more coming.

There are 3 more chapters to this piece and then possibly a 'six months later piece' that my bunnies are beating me over the head with.

somehowunbroken November 22 2010, 05:40:22 UTC

Oh good!

mackenziesmomma November 22 2010, 05:42:09 UTC

Now I just have to go finish the story and get it off to my beta to check over ;)

anuna_81 November 22 2010, 18:34:21 UTC

I absolutely LOVED this. Such cuteness! I was sorry to see story ending, I wanted to read more about them. Also, may I add that I, too, love their professions. Laura + dancing = OTP!

Don't wanna be rude here, but I would gladly read more stories set in this 'verse.

mackenziesmomma November 22 2010, 21:05:37 UTC

*blushes* Thank you. I stressed over this majorly (no pun intended) and had to be talked off my cliff several times by gelbes_gilatier

Don't wanna be rude here, but I would gladly read more stories set in this 'verse.

Not rude at all. I'm actually finishing up the rest of this story (there are 3 more chapters) and then the bunnies have a 'six months later' type idea.