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mach1n3

Monster Within [R]

Jul 27, 2009 18:47

John sat at a booth far removed from the busier section of the bar he and Jim were found themselves this evening. The whiskey in his hands tasted good, and that was the only reason he sipped it slowly. This made his third of the evening, but the effects of the alcohol were no where to be seen. It would take probably the entire bar’s worth of liquor ( Read more... )

doom, crossover, star trek, kirk/mccoy

Comments 28

shini_k July 28 2009, 04:23:07 UTC

I love this! The characterization is great, the voices are spot on and everything!

One itty bitty nitpicky bit though - It's Uhura's first name that Jim is after not her last.

mach1n3 July 28 2009, 09:57:57 UTC

No problem being a little nitpicky. There wasn't a beta to preview the fic and it was an error I overlooked in some way.

laraneia July 28 2009, 09:25:23 UTC

more please, like, right now *makes pleading eyes* I love Reaper!Bones :)

mach1n3 July 30 2009, 00:33:34 UTC

Okay, okay! Soon! I swear it.

siluria July 28 2009, 20:20:39 UTC

I love Doom/ST crossovers, and I really like this! The nightmare felt very real, and was definitely something I could see John having, but I also like the little slips! I'm really looking forward to more here :)

mach1n3 July 30 2009, 00:34:25 UTC

Many thanks. I hope I can keep up with the theme...I feel a little overwhelmed by all the support and kind words from this fandom. *swoon*

moralimperative July 28 2009, 20:58:44 UTC

Country doctors didn’t have the kind of build he did.

i think i spaced out for a good minute just dreaming about that. oh lordy, lordy, lordy.... thank you for yayness fic, and thank you in advance for seriously yayness (day)dreams! :DDD

mach1n3 July 30 2009, 00:30:14 UTC

Hehe. Glad I could give you that moment.

mach1n3 July 29 2009, 02:25:44 UTC

Great news! The prequel is up.