A Bad Habit

[mabbly]

            The air in the museum hung thickly with unsaid words between them.

“Please come to Tenebuiro if you have the time. I'll show you around,” Stella said as an awkward farewell.

“Yes, that sounds good,” Noctis replied, not even sure if the strange woman heard him as she ran off down the hallway.

Occasionally thoughts had a bad habit of

Comments

[anime_queen701]

Heheh, very nice! It'd be so cute to see Stella really get all flustered over what she said like that. And back Noct, eavesdropping like that ;P Now to just wait and see what their relationship will really be like in the game xP

[mabbly]

Yes he is every inch the bad boy >:)

wew, thank youuuuuuuu~!

[e_i_88]

Thank you thank you thank you for doing my prompt!

This is soooo good eventho it's far that what I've meant

(actually what I've pictured is when talking too much Stella slipped and caught by Noct, and then they became cutely awkward. I guess maybe my grammar is still bad.. :( )

but then this is sooo goood! This idea is as good
*or might as well better? ^^p*

and the way Stella say "Prince", "Prince", and "Prince" is sooooooo cute! It's like she's his fan!~ (I know she is! Like me! XD)

Haha, oh yeah, he's naughty for eavesdropping.

*but actually much into sexiness :D*

and one more compliment:
the way you write this story really pictured the same atmosphere as in the trailer (not the gloomy one, the cheerier one I mean. That one with dialogues!). Well done!

and yea, a bit information:
It's just a thing as I know. As I know "Tenebuiro" is actually "Tennebrae", but then again, I'm just 70% sure :)

once again, thank youuuuuuuuu~~~ :D

Re: wew, thank youuuuuuuu~!

[mabbly]

Haha I'm glad you liked it :) I was thinking of Stella physically slipping but that would just ruin my mental image of her elegance and grace :P
And yes I thought she would be cute as a fangirl <3 Who wouldn't be when the guy's that sexy?