Spook Me story

[mab_browne]

Here it is. Thank you to Runriggers and Math-Magician for the beta, and the gentle pointing out that I wasn't being as clear as I'd hoped. I'm not entirely convinced that I'm clear yet, but I hope that my tone is more consistent, anyway

Comments

[snailbones]

Beautifully clear, and very creepy too, thank you!

I love anything with tentacles - erm *g* - and in spite of being creepy, and your warnings, it's a wonderful love story. Thank you for sharing it.

[mab_browne]

Thank you. :-) I wanted it creepy but I also wanted it understandable, and that ended up being hard work.

[math_magician]

Thanks to you too, Mab. I enjoyed the whole experience, as well as the story.

[mab_browne]

Thank you for the hard work. :-)

[stargatesg1971]

Great atmosphere and weirdness. I loved the wariness in Jim and how Blair tried to comfort/reassure him when he was really freaking out himself. I also adore the fact that it left them in a sense a need to act on their hidden feelings in a more timely manner. A lovely read! Thanks for creeping me out in and giving me a kind of love story at the same time :D

[mab_browne]

I do like to creep people out, and I like a good love story as well, so you enjoying the combo is fine by me. :-) Thank you.