Moonridge fic

Oct 23, 2008 20:38

Wot, me spam? But I missed my little PC so much... *smooches PC*

This is a short that I wrote for Terry, which timed out while I was away. J/B slash, 2,300 words approx, explicit sex so totally not work safe, otherwise pretty fluffy.

ETA Eeep. I forgot to mention that this was handily betad by the lovely elmyraemilie. Mea culpa...

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stories and writing 2008, moonridge

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janedavitt October 23 2008, 12:54:09 UTC
That's left me as warm and tingly as they undoubtedly are. Love them teasing each other so openly and yet privately and love all the details and images you weave into this.

So hot and so good.

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mab_browne October 23 2008, 19:04:09 UTC
I had fun with this and EE made some useful suggestions. *g* Thanks.

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callistosh65 October 23 2008, 15:14:42 UTC
::thud:: What..? Wh..? :: clears throat, picks self off floor:: Good grief, that was hot!! Superb, I loved the sense of build up you created between them, all that innuendo and word play, and the dabs of oil.. me oh my but that was hot.. :: wanders off to find lost coherency::

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mab_browne October 23 2008, 19:05:08 UTC
*worriedly checks Callisto over for bruises* Thank you. Glad you liked. :-)

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carodee October 23 2008, 16:47:17 UTC
This is delicious. I love Blair's seductiveness and the little touches designed just for Jim. And then you hit my special kink as Jim got caught up in his senses! *bites knuckle in delight* Wonderful PWP. Lucky Terry, lucky us.

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mab_browne October 23 2008, 19:06:03 UTC
Thank you kindly. I did have fun with this. Teasy Blair - bless him.

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admiralandrea October 23 2008, 18:16:03 UTC
Gorgeous and hot!

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mab_browne October 23 2008, 19:06:28 UTC
So pleased that you liked. :-)

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anxiety_junkie October 24 2008, 04:29:00 UTC
Wow. Um, yeah. *clears throat* I'm gonna go, uh, take a shower. Right now. *g*

This was the best part, though: There's a dab of scent in the hairline at the back of Blair's neck; there's some on Blair's collarbones, in the creases of his elbows and his knees; and there's some, just a touch, in the crease between Blair's thighs and groin, a touch rising from the top of the line of his buttocks. Jim can place all of those tiny hotspots of spice and citrus, and Blair knows that he can.

I can really see Blair thinking of that. Sometimes it's hard to think of Blair as having any subtlety, but this was perfect. Lovelovelove.

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mab_browne October 24 2008, 18:17:26 UTC
There seems to be considerable consensus that Blair applying essential oils with the intent of driving Jim crazy is a sexy image. *buffs nails*. Thank you for the lovely fb. :-)

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