I thought it was going to end happy, or maybe Ryan cheating on Brendon with a high Pete - i kept thinking that was coming but OMG i cant believe thats how it ended!
HELL NOEEEEEEEES YOU DID NOT JUST FUCKING DO THAT YOU DIDN'T JUST FUCKING MAKE BDEN CHEAT YOU FUCKING DIDN'T!
BUT OH YOU FUCKING DID YOU MADE HIM MOAR OF A FUCKING SKANKY WHORE! A BLOODY HOEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
EUGH!
IT WAS ALL PEACHY KEEN THEN YOU HAD TO GO AND FUCKING CHANGE IT ALL UP DIDN'T YOU!!! DIDNT YOU?!!?? MAKE IT ALL SAD AND NASTY AND MAKES YOU WANNA CRY! IT COULD HAVE BEEN SMILEY AND FLUFFY BUT NOPE!
NOW YOU EXPECT US TO WAIT FOR A SEQUEL? DON'T YOU THINK IT'S ENOUGH TORTURE MAKING THAT HAPPEN?! THEN YOU GO AND ADD A MAHUSIVE CLIFF HANGER (WHICH IS REALLY GOOD) THAT MAKES ME FUCKING WANT TO KEEP USING SCARY CAPS TILL YOU TO POST THE SEQUEL! WELL THEN! *turns back to you* .. ... .. that's whut you get! now.. GO AND MOTHERFUCKING UPDATE THIS FUCKING THING SO I DON'T FUCKING DIE! MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAARR NAAAAOOOO BETCH!.....please? <3333333333333333333333 :] [: :] [: :] [: :] [: :] [: :] [: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Oh my god. That was utterly amazing. This whole story. I bawled at the end though. I prefer Ryan be the bad guy for some reason, not sure why. This was... sakfh;ladhf perfect.
I'm such a retard, I read But Now I have Her earlier today, then saw this and read it. And I was reading But Now I have Her, and I was like "How did they break up? I don't get it, why doesn't the author explain why." And I saw the ending to this and I was like "aw hell I read it backwards."
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I think im dreaming, or having a nighmare :(
I thought it was going to end happy, or maybe Ryan cheating on Brendon with a high Pete - i kept thinking that was coming but OMG i cant believe thats how it ended!
AMAZING STORY THOUGH.
I loved it XD
Youre a brillian writer :)
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Means a lot it does.
I thought about having Ryan cheat on Brendon with Pete, but then the sequel would have a lot less meaning.
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THERES A SEQUEL ?!?! :O
YEAAAAHHH!!
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NOOO FUCKING WAY.
HOW COULD THAT...
NO, WHY'D YOU DO THATTT ):
NO NO NO NO NO NO.
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Sequel soon!
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you're just adding drama
to an awesome fic to make
it more awesome.
IT'LL WORK OUT, WON'T IT? (:
*FLUTTERS EYELASHES*
AHHA thank god (:
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YOU DID NOT JUST FUCKING DO THAT
YOU DIDN'T JUST FUCKING MAKE BDEN CHEAT
YOU FUCKING DIDN'T!
BUT OH YOU FUCKING DID
YOU MADE HIM MOAR OF A FUCKING SKANKY WHORE!
A BLOODY HOEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
EUGH!
IT WAS ALL PEACHY KEEN THEN YOU HAD TO GO AND FUCKING CHANGE IT ALL UP DIDN'T YOU!!! DIDNT YOU?!!?? MAKE IT ALL SAD AND NASTY AND MAKES YOU WANNA CRY! IT COULD HAVE BEEN SMILEY AND FLUFFY BUT NOPE!
NOW YOU EXPECT US TO WAIT FOR A SEQUEL?
DON'T YOU THINK IT'S ENOUGH TORTURE MAKING THAT HAPPEN?!
THEN YOU GO AND ADD A MAHUSIVE CLIFF HANGER (WHICH IS REALLY GOOD) THAT MAKES ME FUCKING WANT TO KEEP USING SCARY CAPS TILL YOU TO POST THE SEQUEL!
WELL THEN!
*turns back to you*
..
...
..
that's whut you get!
now..
GO AND MOTHERFUCKING UPDATE THIS FUCKING THING SO I DON'T FUCKING DIE!
MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAARR NAAAAOOOO BETCH!.....please?
<3333333333333333333333
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darn
sequel better be soon ;]
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I feel like crying.But I can't because I'm about to go out with some friends -tears up-
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Oh my god.
That was utterly amazing.
This whole story.
I bawled at the end though.
I prefer Ryan be the bad guy for some reason, not sure why.
This was... sakfh;ladhf perfect.
I'm such a retard, I read But Now I have Her earlier today, then saw this and read it. And I was reading But Now I have Her, and I was like "How did they break up? I don't get it, why doesn't the author explain why." And I saw the ending to this and I was like "aw hell I read it backwards."
dsgklhsdg give me your skills, now.
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Thank you for reading even it was backwards =D
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