Proclivity: Spectacles

[m_s_fuery]

Story Title: Proclivity

Episode Title: Spectacles - 1

Rating: PG13

Word Count:  2,780

Summary: When Ed has a mishap and ends up needing glasses, he finds that Schezka starts acting differently towards him.

Author's Note:

This story started as a second attempt to venture into the fanfiction realm (the first was Alchemic Laser Tag).  This series explores

Comments

[aeri_s]

*grin*
This is pretty cute~
And somehow, the image of Ed with glasses just makes my brain go *kapoof*. Too funny.
The first part was a bit confusing though, I felt.
Interesting idea? Hehe...

[m_s_fuery]

Thank you. And your comments are duly noted as well. I appreciate it, and look forward to any ideas you might have. ^_^

[edxwin4eva]

Did Schezka drug Ed?? O.o'
Great chappie ^_^
Seeing Ed in glasses doesn't seem at alll werid i can see him in glasses cuz of his dad so i can see it ^_^
Who are the twins?
This was so cute ^_^
Over and Out
mm.

[m_s_fuery]

Thank you for the comment. ^_^
The twins are from an as-of-yet unwritten episode of this series- is there something in specific that makes you curious about them?

[edxwin4eva]

Well that they fall under the catagory of strange which makes them i suppose intriguing that they are strange and yet intersting ^_^ i hope that made sense ^_^
Over and Out
mm.

[m_s_fuery]

Excellent! Yes, I understand, thank you for the explanation. This is good feedback. ^_^

[m_s_fuery]

Gah! You've got a good eye- I'll pay more attention to that next time.
And yeah, I also felt like it was way too convenient a plot device- but he is supposed to be distracted in a way he's never been distracted before, so...

Flowers? O_o?

*^_^* I liked that part myself, it was quite amusing to me after I wrote it.

Thanks for the review, it helps a lot. ^_^

[m_s_fuery]

There are hints in other parts of this chapter, but for the real explanation, I'd have to write that episode.

[vladikii91x]

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