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Fic: Amulet of Shinnok

May 04, 2011 21:56

Title: Amulet of Shinnok
Author: ella_rose88
Rating: G
Word Count: 4, 261
Characters/Pairings: Arthur/Gwen, Merlin, Gaius and OC
Spoilers: None really. Future fic.
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters at all (though I wish I did!). Information on the Amulet of Shinnok I got from here
Summary: Merlin encounters a mysterious small child.
Author’s notes: ( Read more... )

rating: g, pairing: arthur/gwen, fic: one shot, fandom: merlin

Comments 21

scarlettpeony May 4 2011, 13:04:34 UTC

I just wanted to be the first person to comment here! LOL!

Off to read now.

ella_rose88 May 4 2011, 21:45:27 UTC

LOL ILU♥!

LOL what did ya think Sophie?

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ella_rose88 May 4 2011, 21:46:49 UTC

I will try and write more. It will be a good distraction since I'm not looking at spoilers XD!

Thanks for commenting here too bb!

starry_laa May 4 2011, 15:09:02 UTC

This was a wonderful first fic, bb! I love the interchanging timelines and the confusion Merlin and then Arthur being in the future and Amhar coming to the past brings. Love the small glimpse of the future world, too! (And yay to Gwen's lovely gown.) ♥

ella_rose88 May 4 2011, 21:44:44 UTC

Thanks so much for your comments bb! I'm glad that you loved the interchanging timelines!

scarlettpeony May 4 2011, 22:27:11 UTC

I've been reading this in little bits during the day. Although I've read versions of this plenty of times and although I knew what was going to happen (because I helped you work out the plot) I have to say I enjoyed it. It was nice seeing all your hard toil and labour coming together finally. Bet you feel really accomplished -- I know I still do when I post a new fic, and I've been writing for a long time ( ... )

ella_rose88 May 4 2011, 22:36:15 UTC

Thanks Sophie! I'm glad that you liked the bits I kept and added. With the Amulet, I decided that I had to have a reason why having the amulet in Camelot might be bad, and I think that if the two Morgs know about it, no doubt they would use it for their own means. So I thought what if Future!Merlin swamped them.

It was Thursday's idea to have F!Gwen and P!Arthur to kiss so thank her. It was a great idea!

Yeah, I know there will be a few awkward spots here and there, but overall I'm happy with

scarlettpeony May 4 2011, 22:42:46 UTC

Thursday may have thought of the kiss but I was one of the people who suggested Gwen grab Arthur so I'm proud that make it in too. But we don't need thanks because you were the one who took our long-winded musings and made it work, so I'll thank you! :DDD

As I've already said, great job!

ella_rose88 May 4 2011, 22:48:56 UTC

LOL I'm having difficulty remembering who suggested what to me!

But it seems everyone liked Gwen pulling Arthur into the alcove! Jen had a note saying that she loved that bit! I grinned like a loon!

You're welcome! I respect and value your, Thursday and Jen's opinion because you guys have a lot of experience writing fics.

Thanks once again *blushes*

BTW: LOL just put my application in to join your spoiler free community!

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railise May 6 2011, 15:11:14 UTC

Although, I wonder what happened to my neck scarf? I have a feeling that Arthur or Gwaine had something to do with it.
LOL!! Good call. XD And my other favorite moment was Arthur lurking for a kiss. <3

I really like how you played with the crossovers between the times; that worked well. Nice job!!

ella_rose88 May 11 2011, 07:43:29 UTC

Thanks for your lovely comments ♥!

Glad that you liked those bits and that the cross-over between times worked well!