Comments | m14mouse: When In Doubt, Hit The Escape Button 5/5

m14mouse

When In Doubt, Hit The Escape Button 5/5

Jul 11, 2011 22:12

Title: When in Doubt, Hit the Escape Button
By: M14Mouse
Artist: Serenda_art
Beta: Solarbear614
Gene: SPN AU Gen
Rating: PG-13 for language and violence
Word Count: 20,200
Warning: Zombie ponies and unicorns
Summary: Sam and Dean are ordinary brothers from an ordinary planet called Earth. Until the aliens came and took them away.

( Part 5 )

spn big bang 2011, character: castiel, character: sam, character: dean, show: supernatural, au

Comments 1

scubarang August 10 2011, 00:13:58 UTC

The idea for your story was original and cute. You made it fun by mixing in some of the characters of the show in inventive ways.

Unfortunately, the poor grammar really distracted from the story. I'm guessing that English isn't your first language, but a good beta will help eliminate that problem.

Thanks for sharing your fun story, I really liked the idea of zombie ponies.