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Story: Ridiculous Paranoia

Oct 24, 2013 23:44

Title: Ridiculous Paranoia
Author: Lzay_Niight
Words: 1,082
Paring: Surprise!
Rating: M
Warnings: None I am willing to reveal. (Hint: Tags)
Summary: Draco had suspected, and it was enough to fuel his imagination after he had been woken up from Potter leaving their shared bedroom again.
A/N: I was bored, and after browsing through stories got hit on ( Read more... )

paring: lucius/harry, paring: harry/draco, oneshot:ridiculous paranoia, fandom: hp

Comments 17

leiasummers October 25 2013, 18:18:37 UTC

I think if Draco truly wanted revenge, he should report Lucius to the authorities and get him locked up in Azkaban for having sexual relations with a minor(The Boy Who Lived at that), especially since Lucius didn't seem the least bit remorseful ( ... )

True... lzay_niight October 25 2013, 19:09:54 UTC

Probably shouldn't have put the Harry/Draco/Lucius, or should have added the 'love-triangle' tag with it. I thought by not putting threesome/moresome, made it obvious that it wasn't. I was on auto-pilot though, so that was my bad.

I could not put down the tag 'infidelity/cheating' since Harry and Draco weren't dating, just friends with a little more on Draco's side.

Though their is Lucius/Harry and hints at Draco/Harry, the parings wasn't really the main idea. Draco seeing his father and best friend going at it and his reaction, was.

But I do agree, I will make the tags clearer.

Re: True... leiasummers October 28 2013, 01:47:27 UTC

Sorry, but I guess this made me fear bottom Draco lj. This story though it was Draco centric did not have Draco in a pairing whatsoever and I don't see unrequited as a pairing either. So it can't be classified as Draco/Harry or hints of it, especially since there's no mutual attraction between the two of them. It doesn't even seem like a love triangle. What's so bottom about this Draco, you know? I don't think this can be posted on bottom Draco at all but it's my own opinion.

I know it's not your intention but instead of feeling for Draco and his unrequited feelings and his 'rage and betrayal.' I just felt like you were trying to shove Harry/Lucius in my face with this fic, knowing people expect Draco-something.

I've read alot of stories with Draco having unrequited feelings in bottom Draco lj with Draco still ending alone but this just made me feel cheated.

Re: True... leiasummers October 28 2013, 01:53:18 UTC

Sorry for being depressing but it feels like you just threaded all over the only place on earth that I actually love and I'm not kidding. I refresh bottom Draco everyday for new fics. It's the one place I go to for comfort. I really really wished you didn't post this on bottom Draco so now this fic would always leave a black mark on my favourite place. It feels like a Draco bashing. Especially since Harry and Lucius doesn't care at all about Draco.

If you were trying to center this on Draco's feelings and cliffhanger with what he's going to do next, I think you did it wrongly.

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lyonessheart October 27 2013, 22:32:02 UTC

I have to agree with the previous comment - you post this in Bottom Draco as Harry/Draco with Lucius/Harry and then it is only Harry/Lucius and nothing else. It is taken completly out of context it throws the reader into a world which we know nothing about and it dissappoints every expectation.

From this context I would expect Draco to curse his father to hell and back - and get him thrown into Aszkaban for sexual assault on Harry - but the way you wrote this Harry might like what Lucius has done with him.

Sorry that is NOT what I wanted to read.

Read more carefully, please lzay_niight October 27 2013, 23:47:26 UTC

I did not say this would be straight up Harry/Draco, only that it 'hinted' at it. And again, as I mentioned in my reply to leiasummers, the point of this little snap-shot of a story is Draco bursting in on his father and his best-mate (Mentioned on the bottom Draco post) having sex together, and his reaction, nothing more.

This isn't smut, this isn't a threesome, but a brief glimpse of the idea I had of a 'possible' love-triangle (also tagged in the bottom Draco post) between Lucius, Harry, and Draco.

"From this context I would expect Draco to curse his father to hell and back - and get him thrown into Aszkaban for sexual assault on Harry - but the way you wrote this Harry might like what Lucius has done with him." <- This is all that I wanted. To have my readers guessing on what would be Draco's next move.

Re: Read more carefully, please lyonessheart October 28 2013, 09:34:47 UTC

then you need to watch where you piost this for fucks sake! post this on your own lj all you want but not in places where people explicitly look for Draco/Harry and then be all offended that you don´t get applause for it. And where did you say you only hinted at it? you my friend are delusional. I would not have read this if the description had made clear what you REALLY want. I don´t want to guess and have to make up my mind of what an offended Draco might do.

Re: Read more carefully, please lzay_niight October 28 2013, 22:34:15 UTC

"then you need to watch where you piost this for fucks sake! post this on your own lj all you want but not in places where people explicitly look for Draco/Harry and then be all offended that you don´t get applause for it ( ... )

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