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lytrigian

The Secret Oasis, part 3

Nov 03, 2009 01:34

Part three of "The Secret Oasis". +10 internets to whoever can identify the homage to a well-known manga.

( It was easy enough to pick up their traces from just behind the dune ridge. )

the secret oasis, sword & sorcery, original, fantasy, gay, yaoi

Comments 8

engine_red November 4 2009, 01:51:20 UTC

I always get so excited when you post new things! I really love your characters since they do not follow any stereotype I know.
I'm especially fond of Kit's personality because it contrasts so much with his appearance (which is just adorable, but that's me), I love how he's so energetic and spunky. But again I love characters like Kit who can kick ass and take no shit.
Tam is, for lack of a better word, just wonderful. No seriously, I'd really love to know more about his white fire though, I don't think I ever got to know what it is for sure, only it allows him to enter in a pseudo-berserk mode or something. I also admire how he's so patient and gentle with Kit. <3

You're an excellent story teller but what I admire in you is how you can portray the characters and convey their personalities so well, I also enjoy the actions sequences, a lot. I bet those aren't easy to write at all...

Thanks for the hour well spent. XD

lytrigian November 4 2009, 07:11:06 UTC

I'm really glad you liked it ( ... )

engine_red November 4 2009, 14:57:49 UTC

I understand your problem very well, it's hard to get characters right when we, ourselves, do not share any kind of similarity (be it psychological or physical) with them ( ... )

chained_blunt November 15 2009, 05:33:00 UTC

Love this story!
And I agree with engine_red, your characters don't follow the cliche/stereotype I've seen/read and it's great<3

Hope to see more<33

lytrigian November 15 2009, 11:00:33 UTC

Thank you!

If you want more, the other stories in the series are up for you to read.

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lytrigian January 10 2010, 10:45:45 UTC

Thank you!

I'm really writing a series of stories, not a single story with chapters. And this is one story, divided into parts only because the whole thing is too large for a single LJ post.

And I've been going very slowly, which annoys me, but I've had very little creative energy. I'm very glad you remembered, and enjoyed it.

ravynrants October 18 2010, 06:37:25 UTC

I think this might be my favorite story from you so far. There's just something about desert sands...makes me think of harem boys and sultans I guess.

lytrigian October 18 2010, 16:20:11 UTC

Thank you! I had a hell of a time getting it together, so I'm glad it came off well.

As for desert harem boys... well, I hope I get that one done.