fic: Pryde & Wisdom: Destiny Can be so Hard, so Kick it in the Balls, PG13/R

[lyssie]

disclaimer: not mine
rating: er, Rish? sexual situations, language, but nothing explicit
pairing: Kitty Pryde/Pete Wisdom
set: semi-current canon, not long after the Wisdom LS.
length: barely 1000 (I was trying for a drabble...)
notes: for ladielazarus. All mistakes are my own. For those eying the title and going "wut", I loathe titles

Comments

[skaryma]

Bravo. This is a lovely little taste of the two of them; lots of juicy little details, but they don't weigh down the momentum of the action.

[lyssie]

Thank you =)

I have a hard time grasping current canon, if only because there's so little of it I've been inclined to read since 1998

[ladielazarus]

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

Thank you. Thank you. :) :) :)

Seriously, I really liked it. I especially like the 'cracker jacks' line and the part about her slamming him up against the door. hawt. the end.

My own Pryde/Wisdom smut should be up this afternoon. :)

K.

[lyssie]

*laughs* You're welcome.

Kitty and Pete were always very physical, and he's not that much larger than her (despite the artists trying to make him out to be Bond). And, well, Kitty gets impatient, at times.

She's also gotten a bit older (and more experience), and knows what she wants. He might get scratched if he takes his time.

;)

[ladielazarus]

...Hope Springs Eternal...

[lyssie]

This was a mistake. Kitty thinks it, but doesn't voice it. If she turns her head, she'll see Pete's shoulder, a little further and she'll see the scratches she laid into his side when he was particularly obtuse

[made_in_ink]

This is perfect! The awkward whatamidoing turmoil blends naturally with the lust and need for each other. It's not goopily sentimental and keeps true to the characters and the time apart.

I hope you write lots more Pryde and Wisdom soon! :)

[lyssie]

Thank you =)

I'm working at it, it's hard, because unlike Kara and Sam from BSG, Kitty and Pete require, well, finesse. (also, they're not so given to massive bouts of drunkenness and random porn)