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lysapadin

[fic] KHR - Wild Justice

Mar 10, 2011 16:57

Title: Wild Justice
Characters/Pairings: Tsuna/Kyouko; Gokudera/Haru; Chrome, Mukuro, I-Pin
Summary: Most people assume that Kyouko's really nice. They're mistaken: she's simply polite. And there's a huge difference between "nice" and "polite."
Notes: Teen and up. A hugely belated fic for round four of khrfest, prompt III-17: Kyoko - Haru is killed by a ( Read more... )

fandom: katekyou hitman reborn, c: gokudera hayato, c: sawada tsunayoshi, c: sasagawa kyouko, c: i-pin, label: character death, c: rokudou mukuro, 01001-10000 words (fic), label: angst, c: chrome dokuro

Comments 2

yuuki_kaname March 13 2011, 04:12:19 UTC

WOW, am I the first to comment? Haha^^

Nice fic...I really liked the last part...just thought that it should be 'Gokudera-kun' instead of 'Hayato-kun'...I don't think Kyoko would ever call Gokudera Hayato...it's just...pretty weird.

It felt like Kyoko was interfering a little too much though, into Tsuna's territory...like she was taking charge of everything...since well, she's new to this, right?

Haha, but maybe that was the point of your ficXD I still liked your fic, was a lovely read(: And last note, there IS 5986 that I'm seeing right?:3 Gotta love that pairing:D

lysapadin April 9 2011, 19:36:23 UTC

(belated response is belated!)

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Gokudera and Haru were together in this fic, before the obvious. *grins* As for the rest, well. *shrugs* I tend to think that after several years of being in the Vongola, plus being his boss's wife, would probably put Kyouko in a place where she'd use his given name. *amused* And yes, Kyouko stepping up and getting involved is pretty much the point of this fic; I expect that as time goes on, she and Tsuna will find some kind of accomodation on that front.

Thanks for commenting!