Comments | lysapadin: [fic] PoT - Hold a Handful of Sand

lysapadin

[fic] PoT - Hold a Handful of Sand

Jan 29, 2010 16:06

Title: Hold a Handful of Sand
Characters/Pairing: Fuji/Yuuta
Summary: Yuuta isn't someone who'll permit himself to be held, but there are ways of coping with that.
Notes: Adult! Smut with brothers who love each other very much. For Porn Battle IX, prompt: Fuji/Yuuta, possessiveness. 1562 words.

( The mistake Shuusuke had made with Yuuta in the first place was in thinking that Yuuta was someone who would allow himself to be held. )

c: fuji shuusuke, 01001-10000 words (fic), label: smut, label: incest, c: fuji yuuta, fandom: prince of tennis

Comments 6

longleggedgit January 29 2010, 22:59:46 UTC

Mmmm, very sexy and also romantic, in that creepy way Shuusuke has. Loved it!

lysapadin February 5 2010, 18:42:44 UTC

Glad you liked it!

venivincere January 30 2010, 13:54:36 UTC

Hmmm. I really liked this. It's incredibly hot, but even better, I think, was Yuuta's fierce independence and Fuji's willingness to wait it out. Poignant. Nicely done!

lysapadin February 5 2010, 18:41:02 UTC

*beams* Thank you so much--that stubborn independence and Fuji's patience was really the point of this one for me, and the smut less so. I'm glad that that's coming through!

mayezinha February 20 2010, 08:01:00 UTC

It's always intersting how in a way, they really get each other.
And of course, an enjoyable fic.
Thanks for sharing!

lysapadin March 16 2010, 01:45:18 UTC

*laughing* I really do have an obsession with the Fuji brothers, and how they might go about figuring each other out.

I'm glad you liked it!