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lysapadin

[fic] KHR - To Those Who Wait

Jan 28, 2010 15:15

Title: To Those Who Wait
Characters: Hibari/Yamamoto
Summary: Delayed gratification has its good points.
Notes: Adult; smut! For Porn Battle IX, prompt: TYL!Hibari/TYL!Yamamoto, tea, impatience. 1341 words.

( Kyouya sits with his legs folded under him and a cup of tea in his hands, the very image of stillness and reflection. Only his eyes give him away; they glitter under the fall of his hair, dark and calculating. )

fandom: katekyou hitman reborn, 01001-10000 words (fic), label: smut, c: hibari kyouya, c: yamamoto takeshi

Comments 6

xxcrownclownxx January 28 2010, 22:07:06 UTC

Great fic >///<

It was hot and I like the way you write it XDDD

lysapadin January 29 2010, 15:44:59 UTC

*grins* Thank you very much!

umarekawareru January 28 2010, 22:59:53 UTC

*beams* This is just what I needed to go to bed in a good mood. I love it when you write these two!

lysapadin January 29 2010, 15:44:18 UTC

*grins* Thanks! I do love them best, though I feel like I don't write them quite as often as I write other pairings.

chinpirako January 29 2010, 01:29:14 UTC

Awesome! Well it is a fact 8018 and 1880 are my OTP's, but still, you write great great great stories with them!

And I liked how this one started...Hibari's seducing ways are irresistible. Also, I don't know why, but as I was reading, I was under the impression that Yamamoto was going to top. I don't know how to express it, but at least in that fic, these two don't necessarily have the typical seme/uke behaviour....I think.

lysapadin January 29 2010, 15:42:51 UTC

*laughing* I actually strive to resist the seme/uke thing with all my heart; it's just so weird for me to always write the characters doing the same things with each other, and surely they would trade off from time to time... *shrugs*

Ah, well. I'm glad you liked it! *beams* I do love the image of Hibari sitting there and teasing Yamamoto by going slowly, and how twitchy Yamamoto would be getting towards the end of things.