[fic] KHR - Sea Change

Jan 13, 2010 18:30

Title: Sea Change
Characters/Pairings: Mukuro, M.M.
Summary: It's time to get a few things straight.
Notes: For round three of Prompt Battle at
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c: rokudou mukuro, fandom: katekyou hitman reborn, 01001-10000 words (fic), c: m.m.

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eigwayne January 14 2010, 01:51:52 UTC
Even though it's rather cruel to M.M., I loved your Mukuro in this. He is so cold and detached, like I imagine canon-Mukuro to be, and the comparisons to instruments of murder were perfect. And M.M. was just how she should be~

So your characterizations were spot on, and your prose is very elegant. I really enjoyed it.

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lysapadin January 22 2010, 02:44:43 UTC
Thank you very much! Mukuro scares me, sometimes, with how cold he can be.

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teruame January 15 2010, 04:19:15 UTC
Wow...;__; Poor M.M., but, I can definitely see Mukuro saying this to her. Very much like how I imagined him to be.

Right-on. And such pretty wordings. *___*

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lysapadin January 22 2010, 02:35:31 UTC
Yeah, M.M. really got it in this one. Poor thing.

I'm glad you liked it! (and the prose, heh; I've been reading too much Heyer lately.)

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lysapadin January 22 2010, 02:32:42 UTC
*grins* Thank you!

Mukuro knows how to be really vicious when he wants to be, that's for sure.

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umarekawareru January 27 2010, 15:48:12 UTC
I love the atmosphere here. You had me holding my breath here, dear. ♥

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lysapadin January 28 2010, 00:36:00 UTC
*grins* Thank you! I just couldn't resist this one, especially after the last few chapters.

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