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lyricsandhearts

so it's summer, so it's suicide

May 30, 2011 19:15

Title: so it's summer, so it's suicide
Author: Ellie (lyricsandhearts)
Disclaimer: Don't own Big Time Rush. Title, cut text, and a quite a few of the lines in the fic are from poems by Richard Siken.
Rating: Somewhere between PG-13 and R
Pairings: Jo/Camille
Warnings: Brief halfway-implied-halfway-obvious sex, second-person perspective
Summary: You're in a car ( Read more... )

series: dear forgiveness, a wild poet appears, big time rush: four is better, jo/camille: good at goodbyes, hooray for fic, oh look i wrote something

Comments 25

garnetice May 31 2011, 00:44:24 UTC

Ummmm. Ummmmmm. Ummmmmmmmmmmmmm. This killed me. It was like taking heaploads of gorgeous and beautiful and wonderful and piling them together into a concrete hole and then adding a huge dash of sad with a sprinkle of hope and then diving in it all and realizing that none of that is enough to let you swim. So you drown it in it, but it's okay, and just- that probably made no sense what so ever, but my point here is that your prose is sumptuous and your concept is fantastic, and the entire thing is just a thousand kinds of pretty.

lyricsandhearts June 2 2011, 18:04:25 UTC

Dfgshsgsj, oh goodness, thank you so, so much. ♥ Haha, it made perfect sense to me! But I'm just so glad you feel that way, because you have some of the most gorgeous writing in the entire BTR fandom, so this? Means a whole lot. Seriously, thank you. ♥

lyricalecho May 31 2011, 01:00:58 UTC

GOD this is unfair. YOU are unfair. Unfairly amazing. Jo/Camille already leaves me kind of breathless and incoherent, in general, but then I read something like this and I have to go lie down for a while. The imagery is spectacular, and the flow is gorgeous, and Jo, Jo, Jo, and nnng. This.

lyricsandhearts June 2 2011, 18:09:20 UTC

*blushes a whole lot* Jo and Camille tend to do that, don't they? I am-- I'm so pleased that you like this so much, and that you feel like it flows well, because the flow is what I was worried about most, actually. I was terrified that it would just be a big disjointed mess or something, so to be assured that it's not-- Thank you. ♥

xxamlaxx May 31 2011, 02:44:48 UTC

Gurrl I have been waiting to see some Jo/Camille from you for ages.

I really liked the repetition in the beginning of most of the sections. I'm usually not fond of second person, but I thought it was appropriate for this story, it really helped flesh out Jo's thoughts/feelings.

I demand moar Jo/Camille

lyricsandhearts June 2 2011, 18:21:00 UTC

And I've been trying to write some for ages! Glad to see that what I finally managed to write was not horrendous, haha. *g*

I'm so glad you like it! Thank you! ♥ And yeah, I'm definitely not one for second person unless it's used really well, but this fic just absolutely called for it, idek.

Don't worry, I demand it too. If only I could get my muse to cooperate. XD

artemisrampant May 31 2011, 03:32:39 UTC

God this was beautiful. This was perfect. I don't know what it is about this pairing that inspires such beauty, but your interpretation was flawless. I can't quite express how this made me feel, but...very, very well done.

lyricsandhearts June 2 2011, 18:25:37 UTC

Wow, thank you. ♥ I'm so happy you like this so much! I don't even know what it is about Jo/Camille, but-- yeah. They do things to my heart. ♥

elizabethfaye09 May 31 2011, 03:33:51 UTC

So, I'm honestly not a huge fan of Jo/Camille but this this is just...afjdksalfjdksa.

It's so frikkin' gorgeous and beautiful and kinda angsty and sad and just beautiful. I love second person when it's done right and actually makes sense. This little ficlet of yours has made me happy. :)

lyricsandhearts June 2 2011, 18:28:41 UTC

Aww, thank you! ♥ Glad I could make you like something you normally wouldn't be a fan of. *g*