LJ Idol- Week 22- No Sight of Land

Apr 14, 2010 16:53

For the beginning of this story, please refer to my Run Off of a Run Off entry- I got a rock! Here.
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Jeremy woke up in a cold sweat. He couldn’t breathe, the nightmare was so vivid. He reached for Chloe’s hand instinctively. When he couldn’t find it, he tried to speak. Jeremy panicked when sound refused to come out his mouth.

Chloe woke up from ( Read more... )

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adoptedwriter April 14 2010, 21:57:55 UTC
We did the go out in the boat and spread the ashes in the Gulf of Mexico thing when my dad passed, so I could totally relate with this story. AW

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hug_machine April 14 2010, 22:41:58 UTC
Oh this is beautiful. I love how you interpreted this (and the tiebreaker!) prompt. ♥

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fourzoas April 15 2010, 02:16:30 UTC
Nice interpretation of the topic and interesting story!

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theafaye April 15 2010, 04:01:03 UTC
Nice to see you continue this tale and congratulations on surviving the run off.

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millysdaughter April 15 2010, 04:52:53 UTC
I hope you plan to continue Chloe's story!

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