15 Minute Ficlets: Holiday Edition

Dec 16, 2008 22:49

Title: The Cost
Author: Lyra
Rating: PG
Fandom: Dresden Files
Pairing: Thomas/Justine
Spoilers: Blood Rites
Synopsis: A mysterious package stirs up feelings Thomas would rather keep buried. Takes place between between White Night and Small Favour

Author's Notes: Written for evil_little_dog's holiday challenge.

The Cost )

dresden files, 15 minute ficlet, fanfiction challenge, house, fullmetal alchemist, fanfiction

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evil_little_dog December 17 2008, 05:14:04 UTC
HAHAHA to the House one.

Awww to the FMA.

And that first one is really, really sad.

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lyrangalia December 17 2008, 05:42:41 UTC
I'd love to write more snarky House, but that would involve convoluted medical knowledge, and I'm not going to research that much for a fic.

Ed and Winry are rather cute, aren't they?

Poor Tommy. He's so... *pets* psst, READ MORE DRESDEN.

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evil_little_dog December 17 2008, 12:47:54 UTC
I started Dresden the night before last.

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cornerofmadness December 17 2008, 05:20:25 UTC
Aww poor Thoms, that's just very sad

Winry you need to pinch Ed a little

House...snort

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lyrangalia December 17 2008, 05:45:03 UTC
Poor poor Thomas. He and Justine make me sad.

What? Why am I being pinched?! - Ed

I need reason to write snarky House shorts!

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cornerofmadness December 17 2008, 05:50:50 UTC
they are sad

you badgered Winry

you had a point about House=plot

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lyrangalia December 17 2008, 05:52:30 UTC
you had a point about House=plot

Yeah, but I was hoping someone would see a way for me to write shorts with minimal research plot.

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aeron_lanart December 17 2008, 11:28:20 UTC
Poor Thomas. The Dresden fic is so sad, but lovely all the same.

Didn't read the second but couldn't resist the last one even though I don't watch House. Made me giggle funnily enough. I can always offer help in translating (or even making up) medical jargonese as I work in the Health Service (in the UK though) to save you doing convoluted medical research.

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lyrangalia December 17 2008, 18:59:03 UTC
Angsty!Thomas is a new one for me, and it was an interesting challenge to be both true to the Dresden style snarky voice and be all sad and angsty and depressing. Glad you liked!

I've been burning through House episodes lately, and I love to write snarky dialogue, so it seemed a natural fit. Thank you for the offer! If I ever get bit by the need to write an actual House fic instead of little snarky scenes, I will have to take you up on it!

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pegasus2o5 December 17 2008, 14:30:36 UTC
House makes me laugh.

Thomas makes me cry.

YOU make me read fanfic, which I never do. Curses on thee!

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lyrangalia December 17 2008, 19:01:31 UTC
*wide grin* I'm always pleased to lure people into fic!

Thomas and Justine just make me so very sad. I worry that Thomas is going to be seduced by either the Denarians or Mab soon. Justine is just too tempting of a prize for him.

House makes me laugh too. He's such an unrepentant ass.

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pegasus2o5 December 17 2008, 22:01:24 UTC
I don't think Thomas would fall to the Denarians. He's too smart for that. He already knows what it's like to have something else in his head controlling him; he doesn't want more of that. Mab, though... I worry about Mab.

(Dangit, Jim Butcher! Don't you dare ruin one of my favorite characters EVER! I'll boycott your books! I will!

Okay, no way on Earth I will, but I'll stomp and shout, anyway!)

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lyrangalia December 18 2008, 02:49:38 UTC
My worry with Thomas is precisely that he does have a demon in his head, and his thoughts go to "I already have one and I've kept him in check pretty well. Surely I can have another and get to touch Justine again."

If they throw Lasciel at Thomas, I could see him getting worn down enough to take it. But I agree. Mab's suggestion of taking Thomas as the Winter Knight is a little more immediately worrisome.

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mulzrule December 17 2008, 23:02:20 UTC
The FMA was cute but I loved the house drabble. I could hear their voices and everything. I would definitely start reading in that fandom if you published more. :D

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lyrangalia December 18 2008, 00:15:17 UTC
Your icon is TOO cute.

I would love to write more House fic, but like I told ELD and COM, the need for actual plot (since I don't really ship any of the couples yet) and medical research for said plot is making me hesitant. But never say never!

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mulzrule December 18 2008, 16:22:46 UTC
Ed's cute no matter what he does isn't he? I think I have some cute fanfic Roy ones too...

Well, there's always the behind-the-scenes snippets we don't get to see on the show. Of course this probably limits it to drabbles and such but it's a start.

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