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Lyric Challenge Part 3: Dresden Files Fic

Nov 10, 2008 16:28

Title: My Temptation
Author: Lyra
Rating: R for adult
Fandom: Dresden Files
Pairing: Thomas/Others
Spoilers: Blood Rites
Synopsis: Takes place between Blood Rites and Dead Beat, Thomas has trouble holding down the simplest of jobs...

Author's Notes: Written for cornerofmadness' request in my title challenge. Unbeta'd flashfic

( My Temptation )

dresden files, fanfiction challenge

Comments 9

cornerofmadness November 11 2008, 03:22:56 UTC

very well done both of them. Poor Thomas even in your failures you amuse us.

Michael, maybe a cattle prod would work if prayer doesn't.

lyrangalia November 11 2008, 04:13:05 UTC

That last one was not my fault! - Thomas

I have faith in the Lord to enlighten Harry. (And if not, I think Molly's given one of her sisters a cattle prod.) - Michael

cornerofmadness November 11 2008, 04:27:44 UTC

yes yes thomas we know

andMichael? Ha

purplefeen November 12 2008, 12:23:01 UTC

very nicely done, I especially like the second one :)

lyrangalia November 12 2008, 17:58:53 UTC

Michael is a perceptive guy. Harry and Murphy, not so much.

Glad you like them!

somekindofcross November 13 2008, 14:31:46 UTC

Awwww, Thomas!!!!!!!!!!! <3<3<3

lyrangalia November 13 2008, 17:41:49 UTC

Thomas' failures in the job market are all kinds of hilarious, at least for me.

Love the icon!

ladybluestar November 14 2008, 15:21:45 UTC

In the first one: Poor Thomas, he really does find trouble wherever he goes. I really like his story arc and think he makes a great foil to Harry.

The second one brought tears to my ears. Michael is an amazing character and you truly did him justice. Also, it is great to see Harry from his perspective, as we normally see it the other way around.

lyrangalia November 14 2008, 17:58:15 UTC

Thomas still protests that being fired from telemarketing was not his fault. I really love the depth Thomas brings to Harry; Harry's realization that he now has someone to lose really gets me and opens up a whole new level of character to explore.

Michael is really one of my favorites (after Thomas and Murphy), and I don't see him addressed in fic nearly often enough, hence the attempt. I'm glad it works, since second-person POV is notoriously tricky. Poor Harry and Murphy... *pets them*

Thanks for reading; I'm glad you liked them despite how short they are.