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[bookishtype]

Title: Sugar
Author: bookishtype
Fandom: Firefly
Claim: Mal/River
Prompt: “Lord, I was born a rambling man. Trying to make a living and doing the best I can”
Rating: PG
Word Count: 567
Written for: lyric_ficathon challenge 2
Comments: unbetaed. apologies for the lateness of my entry, RL took over everything. thanks to lucasharper for his help when the plot

Comments

[bookaddict43]

I love it! The last line is beautiful and leads the way to something further perhaps? Well done with this pairing!

[karanina]

Nice :)

I like that you built on a habit of River's that we've already seen (lying and listening on the catwalk). Sorry I can't say more, I'm not normally that much of a Mal/River shipper, but it was a nice little fic.

[a_phoenixdragon]

Wow!!! OMG!! And WOW!!

I was so THERE... Damn fine fic honey!! Too powerful and filled with Awesome...

Fantastic...

*Hugs*