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such_heights April 30 2007, 04:37:46 UTC
*grins delightedly* Yay! Thank you very, very much.

This is lovely! I really like Ole and having his POV, that's always a lovely technique. And oh, Rose, of course she'd come back here. *sniffs* And those last few lines of parallel with the Doctor were perfect!

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lyras April 30 2007, 07:41:36 UTC
Yay, glad you liked it! (Although, you were either up very late or very early reading this. :))

I meant to have the Doctor's section the same length as Rose's, but when I came to write it, that was all that wanted to be said. It was quite odd, really.

And you're welcome!

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apostrophet April 30 2007, 05:21:38 UTC
Oh, that's really lovely, in that just-a-tiny-bit-of-heartache kind of way. Rose would be trying to speak Norwegian, wouldn't she? :) And I love both of their answers to the question about where they're from.

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lyras April 30 2007, 07:43:13 UTC
Thanks - very glad you liked it! I had fun with Rose's bad Norwegian :).

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coffee_n_cocoa April 30 2007, 05:27:26 UTC
Oh, how lovely and bittersweet! I love how Ole frames the story.

And yay! Pimpetyness! ♥

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lyras April 30 2007, 07:44:00 UTC
Thank you! I like Ole - I hardly ever write OCs, but he was rather sweet.

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keever April 30 2007, 05:38:53 UTC
Gosh, I like this. ::wibbles::

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lyras April 30 2007, 07:44:38 UTC
Thank you! (And just your icon makes me wibble. :))

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abigail89 April 30 2007, 12:44:53 UTC
OH, very nice!

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lyras April 30 2007, 20:56:51 UTC
Thank you!

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