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lynzie914

BEHIND GLASS (Part One)

Mar 15, 2010 22:39

Title: Behind Glass
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Chloe/Oliver
Rating: PG-13
Summary: An accumulations of moments in the Watchtower as Chloe begins to heal and Oliver helps her get there. Begins directly after Warrior, and will eventually spoil everything up to Conspiracy.
A/N: dh_freak gave me this amazing banner for her contest and I loved it. ( Read more... )

fanfic, fic: behind glass, fandom: smallville, character: oliver queen, ship: chloe/oliver

Comments 24

calie15 March 16 2010, 03:14:24 UTC

I loved it! Can't wait to see what other moments you have in store. And I hope you fix that disaster in Conspiracy.

lynzie914 March 19 2010, 00:43:16 UTC

Thank you! I actually had this big debate with myself over whether to include what happened in Conspiracy, but it actually ended up working with the story pretty well. Well after I put my own spin on it anyways. XD

babydee1 August 8 2010, 11:49:07 UTC

"I actually had this big debate with myself over whether to include what happened in Conspiracy, but it actually ended up working with the story pretty well. Well after I put my own spin on it anyways. XD"

*points upward* THIS. Conspiracy was one big-ass lemon, but my Zod, the gallons of Lemonade that have emerged from it fic-wise have been uber-fantastic! :-D

slytherinpunk March 16 2010, 03:39:30 UTC

I loved this! After the scene in Warrior I had pictured them against a wall or even against the glass, and I was excited to see I wasn't the only one.

I really loved how Oliver said they blurred a lot of lines, I really felt that was in character, as well as when Chloe didn't want to face what they had done. Beautifully written =)

lynzie914 March 19 2010, 00:45:28 UTC

Thank you so much. And you most defenitely weren't the only one to think that about them. In all the scenerios I've thought about for what happened after Warrior, happy, angsty, etc, they always ended up there. Not that I've thought about it a lot or anything...*whistles innocently*

chlavis333 March 16 2010, 04:44:15 UTC

Awesome!I could totally seeit happening that way on Warrior. You did agreat job with where Chloe and Oliver really do seem to be at.
Great job!

lynzie914 March 19 2010, 00:46:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad you like it so far!

zuleikhaa March 16 2010, 04:57:57 UTC

Ooooooohhhhh..

This was good. Really good. Like can't believe they did it against that big ass window good! :-o

So loved Chloe being the one in control , I could see why she wouldn't want to let go of that.. think it's a first for her. She played this whole situation really cool with Oliver and lord knows Ollie needs his ego brought down a notch, plus it's the only way he'll see what's right in front of him...

But omg I can feel the angst coming.... I know you wont let me down =)

my only beef is that i have to wait for the next chapter!

;) can't wait to read it.

Z

lynzie914 March 19 2010, 00:49:52 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that your liking the story and that you think it was "can't believe they did it against that big ass window good". LOL. That totally made me giggle.

And yes, the angst will be coming. Lots and lots of angst.

The next chapter should be up really soon, I just caught up with work and haven't had a chance to work on it. But I have tomorrow off, so fingers crossed it should be up by then.

sxymami0909 March 16 2010, 05:00:31 UTC

OMG I kinda loved this! :-D This was perfect. I love how he was all unsure afterwards and trying to explain or figure things out haha it was too cute! :-D Thanks for sharing!

lynzie914 March 19 2010, 00:51:29 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad your liking it so far. And Oliver is totally cute, I just want to smush him. lol.