Comments | lynzie914: fic: it's a small crime and i've got no excuse

lynzie914

fic: it's a small crime and i've got no excuse

Jul 03, 2014 18:48

title: it’s a small crime and I’ve got no excuse
fandom: harry potter
characters/parings: hermione/harry (background hermione/ron and harry/ginny)
rating: r (warning for cheating and r-rated sexual situations.)
word count: 3065
summary: That’s all they are. Thoughts. A fantasy. Hermione has known how this story will end since sixth year (maybe ( Read more... )

lj what the hell are you doing, character: harry potter, sometimes i write things, fandom: haven, character: hermione granger, one-shot, fanfic, ficathon, fic: it's a small crime, c: brightest witch of her age, ship: hermione/harry

Comments 5

fluffyfrolicker July 5 2014, 02:25:55 UTC

THIS IS AWFUL AND YOU ARE EVIL AND THESE TWO WILL FOREVER BE MY BABIES.

WE COULD HAVE HAD IT AAAAAALLLL.

lynzie914 July 5 2014, 16:43:16 UTC

ITS NOT MY FAULT. IT WAS THE PROMPT'S FAULT. AND ALSO MAYBE YOURS. BECAUSE THIS IS THE SECOND TIME I'VE WRITTEN HP LATELY, AND ONE WAS YOUR PROMPT AND THIS WAS FROM YOUR FIC-ATHON. SO YOU KNOW, REALLY YOU'RE JUST AS MUCH TO BLAME AND JUST AS EVIL.

ROLLING IN THE DEEEEEPPPPP.

(I need to get my self a HP icon again. ugh. i can never just stay with what i have.)

fluffyfrolicker July 6 2014, 02:21:08 UTC

WHATEVER, YOU CAN'T ALWAYS BLAME ME. AT LEAST BLAME ZOE, SHE PROMPTED THIS AND SHE ALMOST EXCLUSIVELY PROMPTS EVIL THINGS.

HP ICON!

youcallitwinter July 5 2014, 18:29:45 UTC

Oh my god, my heart. WHAT ARE YOU DOING.

I LOVE how sad and wistful and hopeful this fic is. Where you get both that sense of ennui, and stasis, of having been stuck in a place long enough for it to have become a habit hard to break, and the constant transgressions related to the same in Hermione's mind, because that's the only real private space that she has, given not only her relationship with these two boys, but also the fact that she's essentially a war hero, so everything that they do seems both; so 'problem of three little people doesn't amount to a hill of beans in this crazy world' and yet bigger than they are, precisely because of who these particular three people are. But for Hermione, it's always Harry and Ron without the titles, and maybe she should be a better person, the upright hero that everyone thinks she is, maybe Harry should be the hero that everyone thinks he is, but they're not, because they do silly, common things like falling in love with your (other) best friend and cheating on people who love them because ( ... )

xx_pinkstar July 10 2014, 14:25:16 UTC

HI I'M DEAD, DONE AND DUSTED.

This was so beautiful ♥