[FIC] Turning back from walking away

Aug 22, 2011 02:12

Title: Turning back from walking away
Characters: Hyukjae, Donghae
Rating: G
Wordcount: 3.011
Summary: There's no point to living without the other, but is he really gone?
A/N: Written over today and yesterday (and possibly another day before that). Mostly today however. This shot is a creation of my mind that needed to be written. Sequel to Read more... )

hyukjae, donghae, super junior, one-shot

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theviewinviolet August 22 2011, 15:07:56 UTC
This is just.... akjskahdjskads HEARTBREAKING
Like those times when you feel so sad your chest actually hurts T.T

You captured so well the feelings of giving up, I can totally see Hyuk bumming around on his couch in a daze.
But oh! The ending :)))) It's nice to see Hyukjae's perspective, and even nicer to see them together in the end. Great work, as always^^

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lyntia August 22 2011, 15:22:03 UTC
I'm sorry for making you feel so sa but I'm glad the angst really made it through. Both this story and it's prequel were meant to be angst, mostly, and not really anything but angst haha.
I didn't really want to show anything with this story, had no particular idea of what I wanted to have my readers see in it, but this just needed to be written because there was so much that was left unsaid.

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paradigm_twist August 22 2011, 15:13:55 UTC
Gosh. This is beautiful. I mean, I was already depressed when I read the previous one-shot about how they weren't meant to be because somethings are meant to be like that. Then you went and do a 180, and showed that maybe, it was just something they had to do. To learn from in order to realize how much being together really meant to each other.

*hears heart cracking*

Ugh. Innocent Mi. But overall, the angst of it really hit the mark. Heart is clenching for the both of them. Thank you Kyuhyun for doing something about it > <

Thanks for sharing! <3

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lyntia August 22 2011, 15:30:11 UTC
Hello you ^-^ It's been a while since we last talked haha. Let me first give a non story related comment; LJs new posting system pisses me off so badly you don't even know. It messes up my lay-out and I can't even edit my masterlist without fucking up the layout (excuse my language; terribly annoyed). I'm thinking of moving to another blog site to post my stories there (blogger most probably). Would you be okay reading stories there or do you want me to keep posting here ( ... )

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paradigm_twist August 22 2011, 15:48:13 UTC
HELLO ^^ Oh yes. It's been a while. I heard. I tried posting on LJ last weekend and it seemed fine to me. What exactly went wrong with it? I usually write it all in HTML on blogger before posting it in LJ including all of LJ's HTML works in the HTML format. So what's up with the new format? @.@ I'm ok either way ^^ Whatever works for you I suppose. As long as you still post to Miracle, I'll find it ^^ Language is excused :)

Aww <3 Missed your writings. Glad to see an update after such a long time ^^ Ah. I actually saw what you described. Since I reread the prequel. But I suppose I thought it was a 180 because I really thought that was the end before this came up and you made them together again~ There was Donghae being all resigned and giving up and trying to at least move on somewhat. Then Hyukjae who left first but find himself unable to move forward anyway. A collective subtle effort to bring him out and do something about it. He just needed a lot of nudges :)

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lyntia August 23 2011, 10:34:34 UTC
I'll still keep this account up to post on Miracle, yes. What went wrong is that whenever I place normal enters, LJ fucks them up and either makes the space in between really long or (like it did in my masterlist) makes it completely disappear. I'm just not up for styling everything over and over again every time I want to post/update something just so it would look the way it's supposed to. OTL

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wookiescookie August 22 2011, 15:44:51 UTC
This was really really good! I love the way it was written, i can really feel hyuk's pain ;__; not my otp but i loved everybit of it!^^

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lyntia August 22 2011, 15:47:33 UTC
Haha I guess I feel happy that even someone who's OTP is not Eunhae likes this. I don't even have any OTP whatsoever so that must be a good achievement haha. Thank you for reading ^-^

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mardong09 February 22 2013, 13:53:33 UTC
I can't believe that people can make you feel like how I feel at the moment!!
People who can write are amazing!!

Thank you for being amazing =')

I'm so happy that there was an happy ending

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