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lyntia

[FIC] I dare you to move

Jun 21, 2011 13:24

Title: I dare you to move
Characters: Hyukjae, Zhou Mi, Donghae, Heechul, Kibum, Siwon
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 3.314
Summary: They're trying to find the lesser one of all evils
A/N: So this is a story I started writing after reading one of my friend's newest fics. It inspired me to write abstract, vague stuff and this is what came out of that. The ( Read more... )

heechul, zhou mi, kibum, siwon, donghae, hyukjae, super junior, one-shot

Comments 4

airplanewishes June 21 2011, 14:34:40 UTC

What I gather from this is that Hyukjae is different because there is something that he yearns for. He always hopes for better things and wants to break out of the darkness.

I really liked how you wrote this. You seem to just improve every single time. Good job!

My fic feels honored to have inspired something so lovely. :)

paradigm_twist June 21 2011, 17:25:29 UTC

This. THIS. Is really interesting. I love reading your fics. They all have these abstract ideas that challenges people to think about what they read. Always open to interpretation with a certain boundary set. I feel so sorry for Donghae. He seems to suffer so much in all of your fics But at least there was hope. Hope that Zhoumi held onto and Hyukjae who slowly believed and grab hold of it. Oh Heechul ;A;

Thanks for sharing! ^^

lyntia June 21 2011, 17:32:55 UTC

Haha I think I have an unknown Donghae hate growing inside of me or something lol. XDDD But he just ... works so well for the angst & the suffering, idk why. And Siwon works good as the evil guy too lol. xD In fact I have another spinoff to Life would be perfect if we had these that also involves Donghae suffering. xD

What I liked myself about this one is that it's so ... totally random lol. The way Heechul appears in between with a certain 'he' person which I left undefined for many reasons. And then how it's Hyukhaewonmi but then goes to hyuk and ends in hyukmi.. I don't know how that happened but I like how it evolved, despite the feel of being disconnected it sometimes has.

paradigm_twist June 21 2011, 17:39:59 UTC

LOL It's good angst though so it's all good ^^ I find it hard to write Siwon among a few others. The feeling just doesn't really come out right. Trying hard to break through it. So far, it's working ok LOL \o/ Sequel to Life :DDDDD

I'm surprised. I like that part about the fic too. It kinda sets a uneven evolution to how Hyukjae's point of view changes while it changes along with what his beliefs and thoughts were at that time. It's pretty interesting.