[FIC] Yours truly

Aug 02, 2010 17:56

Title: Yours truly
Characters: Undefined
Rating: G
Wordcount: 1568

Hey you.. )

original fiction, one-shot

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jcf122 August 2 2010, 23:34:18 UTC
spotspot ^^

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jcf122 August 3 2010, 13:36:26 UTC
Still loved this and I think I'll love it even if I read this 50 times.

Writing down something like this even though the other person will never get to read it is a good idea as this way it allows you to gain a deeper understanding of how u actually feel and the way this letter is written so simpy but with so much meaning is just beautiful.

It's so easy for us to see what we want to see and ignore what we don't want to believe. It's really nice to see her wanting him to be truly happy though - that's really heartwarming and only goes to show how much she really loves him.

I think u already know that I love the 1st paragraph and the last 2 but I think I'll just tell u again.

Will definitely come back and read this <3

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lyntia January 21 2011, 15:04:34 UTC
I don't really have much to say to this since you kind of summed up the whole story and it's feelings exactly as I had them in mind. I guess after a year of you reading my stories and us commenting back and forth we kind of understand each other, eh?

But I did tell you I would give you my pairing if you gave yours and yes, well, it seems we really DO understand each other since I had indeed Hyukhae in mind, however just as with you I was unsure of who was who at what times. Sometimes I imagined Hyuk as the writer, sometimes Hae. It was an interesting story to write. I wanted to portray a general feel so that it would not need any characters, but I guess for biased people like us, there's always a certain few coming to mind, eh, no matter how siLLy. XD

Thank you for reading and commenting, unni, and for sticking with me for almost a year now. ♥

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