FanFiction: ci_fans_unite prompt# 34

[lynnez59]

Title: On the Mend
Prompt: Ross comes to visit sick Eames at her house to find Goren there, washing dishes. Bare foot. Eames' asleep, Ross/Goren talk.
Pairings: Bobby/Alex; Ross/Rodgers
Rating: PG-13
Description: You never know who might end up being your ally
A/N: Thank you to goddessdster for tolerating the BAness of it all and for the great advice and beta

Comments

[muse0fire]

Very nice!

[lynnez59]

Thank you!

[surreallis]

Ooh, I liked that. I love the whole idea of Goren being all domestic and taking care of Eames while she's sick.

Also,this: “We just talked. I’m not trying to move in on Eames.” Made me laugh, and I'm not sure why. I just totally heard it in Ross's voice and pictured him rolling his eyes.

[lynnez59]

I'm glad you found that funny. I think Ross is very funny in that dry I might kill you afterwards sort of way. hehe...

Thanks for reading

[cifan70]

I love this. Very nicely written.

[lynnez59]

thanks!

[lule_bell]

Oooh! The banter in this is spot on!
I liked the bit about Goren watching a documentary about sex in the middle ages. ^^
Well done.
An excellent use of the challenge.

[lynnez59]

I thought that documentary was appropriate -- it is an actual documentary on the history channel

Thanks.

[nerca_beyul]

Haha. I like picturing Bobby like this -- being all domestic while taking care of a sick Eames.

And this line amused me greatly: “I’m not the one who looks like they’re planning on settling in for the night.” And I don't really know why.

[lynnez59]

Thank you!